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I Don'T Hate Mondays--Picture 1

I know... my shirt says I hate Mondays And while I appreciate the donation I've no intentions of shooting children and becoming the next media sensation... ...just because it's Monday Actually any day I still breathe, I feel blessed And lately one day just runs into the next So, no, I don't hate Mondays, it's just like the rest I was taught not to hate, but there are things I don't like Like... hauling dirty water which we lack due to the drought Don't like lying to my little brother, saying everything will be ok Nor the delirium this level of hunger and thirst has brought about I don't like the earth drying up and looking like bark and the trees bearing no leaves, and the animals dying Don't like the stench of death that permeates the stagnant air Nor sleepless nights I lay in the fetal position, crying I don't like my parents feeling guilty that they can't provide more and hoping we don't get ill, without doctors how would we ever survive? I no longer dream about going to school one day, and I've lost the urge to play So, no I don't hate Mondays, whatever day it is, I'm just happy we're all still alive 4/8/16

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Date: 4/27/2016 9:33:00 PM
Dineen, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/16/2016 5:10:00 AM
Magnificent write Dineen... congrats on great win!
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/17/2016 8:50:00 AM
What a wonderful compliment Dr. Sharma, thank you so much!
Date: 4/15/2016 5:08:00 AM
Well written... Enjoyed reading... Congrats on your great win...
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/15/2016 9:35:00 AM
I appreciate you saying so Probir, thank you so much!
Date: 4/14/2016 10:50:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Dineen
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/15/2016 9:35:00 AM
I appreciate that Joseph, thank you!
Date: 4/14/2016 9:32:00 PM
Powerful poem and well written, Dineen. Congrats on your win:)
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/15/2016 9:30:00 AM
Thank you for telling me you felt power in it, and for the congrats, Laura.
Date: 4/14/2016 8:22:00 PM
I'm glad this one placed so high. It truly was one of the very best. BIG congrats in the contest, Dineen
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/15/2016 9:29:00 AM
Quite humbled I am Andrea, so many entries were awesome, thank you very much!
Date: 4/14/2016 5:48:00 PM
Congrats on your placement
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/15/2016 9:28:00 AM
Thank you much Brian!
Date: 4/14/2016 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations Dineen on your placement in the contest. A great interpretation of a very sad photo. Peace young lady:)
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/15/2016 9:27:00 AM
I appreciate it that you feel that way Daniel, thank you so much.
Date: 4/12/2016 3:26:00 PM
A very poignant write Dineen...powerful
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/13/2016 11:51:00 AM
Happy to know you felt power in it Joseph, thank you!
Date: 4/9/2016 1:46:00 AM
Honest and strong write, Dineen, I try my best not to hate. but lately, I force myself because a part of cries for what reality really is. I think I do not like Monday's. :) Glad, you have no bad intentions. awesome poem. Love LINDA
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/10/2016 4:00:00 AM
As a child, I recall elders telling children not to say hate, that it was such a strong word. Thru the years I've come to feel what is real, but not to let it consume me, for there won't be much room for anything else. Probably what the elders meant. I understand what you're saying, Linda. Thank you for such a kind compliment, much appreciated!
Date: 4/8/2016 11:08:00 PM
Extraordinary words:) Very simply put but touched my heart:)A 7 for you Dineen:)
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/10/2016 3:54:00 AM
Gee Jo Daniel, that was quite a compliment! Thanks a million!
Date: 4/8/2016 8:27:00 PM
Great job, Dineen. I've always heard a picture is worth a thousand words. You have summed it up extremely well. Good luck. Peace young lady:)
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/10/2016 3:53:00 AM
Why thank you Daniel. Yes pictures can make those words just flow. Appreciated much!
Date: 4/8/2016 7:33:00 PM
you went out of the ballpark and created a unique story, dineen... greeat job; huggs
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/10/2016 3:51:00 AM
Thanks a bunch very much for saying the story was unique nette. Appreciated!
Date: 4/8/2016 7:18:00 PM
You did FANTASTIC with this theme. It was the one that appealed most to me too!!
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/10/2016 3:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea! That pic appealed the most to you as well? Looking forward to reading more of your art! :)
Date: 4/8/2016 5:19:00 PM
Such sad imagery Dineen but and uplifting ending... The title of the poem reminds me of the old Boomtown Rats song - I don't like Mondays:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/8/2016 6:04:00 PM
The bare minimum can be a reason to rejoice, I have heard of that song Jan. Thank you very much, appreciated! :)

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