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I Do Not Care

I don’t care what you think of me
Or the label that you give
I don’t care what box you’ve found
Cause in there… I won’t live

I don’t care what thoughts you think
Or how you judge my soul
I frankly couldn’t give a damn
If shaming is your goal

I don’t care you think I’m base
Too fat, not pencil thin
I don’t care, cause you know what?
Your judgment is YOUR sin

I don’t care, I do not CARE
I do not give a DAMN
So scroll on by or disappear
Or get caught in this SLAM!

Eileen Manassian Ghali

People see what they want to see....nothing more...nothing less...
This is a sample of SLAM poetry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 9/18/2017 10:05:00 AM
A really beautiful written poem, believe me people never get happy with anyone, nor we need to make them happy, we are only here to make one person pleased and that s God, no other, don t even care what people say, people also told me many things but I ve long started to ignore them and I doesn t even care, just spend your life as you wish, make yourself happy and your God, no one else, it s no one business whether you re fat or thin, black or white, just don t care what they say
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Date: 3/20/2017 2:02:00 PM
this is amazing! love this!!!
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Date: 1/27/2017 1:48:00 PM
Hello Eileen, nice to meet you. I am going to make your poem my favourite. As i am reading your poem, I felt you were talking to me. I enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 1/23/2017 7:45:00 PM
Very articulate and well crafted. I'm glad we're friends! Our five senses often betray us. Only when we lose our eyes and vision do we really begin to see. But it was surely nice to see our rhyme and photos. I know you a little better now. Thanks for visiting my Facebook page.
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Date: 1/16/2017 3:22:00 AM
This is a great SLAM poem! :) You are beautiful and your poetry too. :) Very deep with a spark of awesomeness. -JWE
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Date: 1/6/2017 1:50:00 AM
Eileen, this is so powerful, and you are so RIGHT. And what people below me already said? I second it. This is SLAM at its finest. (I've written a few for other people to perform on stage)
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Date: 1/4/2017 4:50:00 PM
I see you as lovely and talented. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 1/3/2017 10:14:00 PM
Eileen, they wouldn't dare! : )
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2017 8:56:00 AM
I sure hope not! :) Thank you, Doug.
Date: 1/3/2017 3:27:00 PM
interesting take about weakness in the human spirit as judging surely is, Slam seems to be a form that makes a statement and with this one your statement was loud and clear..bravo
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thanks, Frederic. :) This is a bit different than my usual mush, but now and again...it's good to vent. I appreciate your visit, as always.
Date: 1/3/2017 2:49:00 PM
That is the way to tell them! As usual, you have stated everything well with good rhyming. Thank you for the accompanying pictures. You are very attractive!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2017 9:07:00 AM
Awwwww....that last sentence does my heart worlds of good, Robert. I thank you! :) I can roar now and then. ;)
Date: 1/3/2017 12:04:00 PM
Fabulous slam Eileen - you are beautiful inside and out and I KNOW you will look even more amazing with your new look - love the 'I don't care what you think about me' theme -'frankly my dear I don't give a damn' springs to mind - I love you just the way you are:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2017 1:37:00 PM
Thanks, sweetie! So good of you. I've had a horrible day, and this just lifts my spirit. :) Did 45 minutes on the treadmill today after a long break. I'm all sore, but will continue. I love you for loving me...just the way I am. Bless your heart. Love you too. Hugs
Date: 1/3/2017 11:42:00 AM
This was definitely slam poetry, it was loud and it was concise and I could feel it as I read. Nicely done Eileen. It is no one's place to judge another.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2017 2:16:00 PM
Thank you for your words of affirmation, Chris. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/3/2017 9:53:00 AM
I love your confidence, you shine!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2017 2:21:00 PM
Thanks, dear. Sometimes it's just a front. I'm very insecure about my physical appearance, but I try to project confidence. Make up helps! ;) Hugs, sweetie.
Date: 1/3/2017 8:35:00 AM
Excellent slam, Eileen! So true! The best people you get to know are the ones that you might not approach. Blessings!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thank you, dear, for your visit. My father wouldn't approve of using this kind of language. He's a pastor. ;) Yes, sometimes we let appearances get in the way. So right, Kim. Blessings to you too.
Date: 1/3/2017 8:18:00 AM
Tell them all Eileen...You have a special beauty that others can only dream about and that comes from your heart. I can see it all your poems, hear it in your words, and sense it in your glow.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2017 2:33:00 PM
Thank you, Tim. I'm humbled by this post. You are very kind. Sometimes we try to project something that we are not...just to feel...ok. It's hard to have this continual struggle with weight. I sometimes feel like giving up....even being around people, but I will renew my efforts in the new year. I exercised today! :)
Date: 1/3/2017 4:21:00 AM
- No flowers are 100% alike, dear Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2017 2:35:00 PM
Awwwwww....thank you, Sunshine. What a good thought to dwell on. At least I am a flower...Thanks for that reminder. Love you! I hope your new year is going on well. Hugs!
Date: 1/3/2017 4:15:00 AM
Very well said, Eileen! I loved the poem :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/3/2017 2:35:00 PM
Thanks, Claudia. Very kind of you. :) Hugs
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