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I Do Need You Lord But Why

I DO NEED YOU LORD BUT WHY I'm not an atheist, I do believe in Christ How can an all loving God given us such allow any of this Homelessness, poverty, shootings and killings How can a loving God allow the feelings of man to desolve I don't believe He loves me But inside I feel I need Him I do need you Lord but why When all I do is suffer and cry I don't believe you love this world Because the creation you've created Disobeyed you now you've condemn us When the truth of the matter is... God's given us FREE will The choices are yours and mine God's condemnations and punishments Only applies to us when we(I) disobey our Lord God Crimes, murders, killings, rapes, wars, asaughts Incests, fonications, adulteries I don't believe you love this world Because the creation you've created Yet, after all the pains have worn off And after my shame no longer remains And my hurt feelings are now timed forgotten, turn to laugher I don't believe He loves me But inside I feel I need Him I do need you Lord but why It's not you Father God The sin that is in this world Is because of my choice cause I didn't want to listen The sin that is in this world Not your fault but mine I do need you Lord but why Why, because..... I do need you Lord to live this and the next life 3/2/18 Written Words by James Edward Lee ©2018

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Date: 3/3/2018 2:04:00 PM
My dear friend James, skepticism is a virtue... "Did God created us or we created him?" Of course, I mean the way is written in old testament. Don't blame everything on God. The facts are the Truth....Read "Zealot,The Life and Times of Jesus of Nazareth" by R. Aslan, and "A brief history of time" by Stephen Hawking. Your poem is great and lets hope for a savior ...
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Date: 3/8/2018 5:32:00 PM
Oh, Pashang...I'm personally don't blame God for the evils of the world, and also sin nature.....There's just one word that sums up these negative acts... CHOICE.... Man chooses right/wrong good/evil (God right/wrong not mankinds) there is a difference. Peace Brother... thanks for the read James
Date: 3/2/2018 8:14:00 PM
Curiously written, James. We all know where your commitment lies, straight at the feet of your Lord Jesus. Well-done; a unique POV.
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 3/8/2018 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Reason, just trying to shine a light... It's not bout me it's all bout Christ... Peace Out, thanks for the reads... James

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