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Poetry/Free Verse/I dive into the cauldron
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Written, February 14, 2025
For the International Contest, I Dived Into The Cauldron Of Magic Potion and
Sponsor, Anoucheka Gangabissoon, Judged 03/07/2025

Third Place 

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and in my dream I plunge deep into a magic cauldron it is not a pot, vat, or tank not a vessel of any kind but a turquois ocean where blue waves crash over me I plummet and vanish down, down to swim with pretty fish swallowing a sweet elixir a powerful liquid and potion magically warming my body I feel enchantment and fascination rising to the surface I float on the vastness of the ocean under a wide azure sky I notice sea birds gliding land must be close and it is . . . an island lush and green appears swimming to the sandy shore I am struck by singing bird a thousand voices loud filled with an illusion of peace and tranquility I submerge myself into a jungle and the sounds and scents the flower blooms and hues of greens and oh, those birds, divine I linger there until ... I wake in my bed to dawn birds chirping

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Date: 3/7/2025 9:58:00 PM
"a turquois ocean where blue waves crash over me" - indeed, a grand cauldron. A beautifully written poem. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2025 3:10:00 PM
Chris, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings ~
Date: 2/14/2025 7:32:00 PM
Beautiful verse soothing. Dreams are so unpredictable and very confusing to me sometimes not wanting to go back to sleep.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/14/2025 7:36:00 PM
Eve, thank you for the compliment, yes, dreams can be like nightmares sometimes and hard to understand ~
Date: 2/14/2025 4:39:00 PM
Hello Constance, that sounds to me like a dream you had. It is nice to wake up to the birds singing. Friendsip & Love, Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/15/2025 8:15:00 AM
Hello Constance, I sometimes remember my dreams. sometimes i do not. When i remember my dredam i wonder what ir means. Loe & Friendsship /Darlene/
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Constance La France
Date: 2/14/2025 7:37:00 PM
Darlene, oh yes, I can have some very vivid dreams, sometimes I remember all the details and sometimes not ~

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