I Did Not See You For a Long Time

How long I did not
see you
I am eager to see
you again
How long I did not
love you
I want to love you
again…..

I did not write a
poem for a long time
I will write a poem
soon
I did not make a
garden for a long
time
I want to make a
garden full of
roses……

How long I did not
sing a song
I will sing a wild
song for you
How long I did not
write a letter
I want to write a
love-letter for
you…..

Long time I did not
see a cloudy sky
I want to see a
rainfall on the
green fields
Long time I did not
see the snowfall 
I want to enjoy a
snowfall on
roof-tops……

I did not see you
for a long time
I am eager to know
either 
you were as like as
before
or changed to a
great extent…….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/10/2015 3:34:00 PM
Hello Mohammed, I am so sorry. I have missed visiting your workshop poem. Now that the links are up, hopefully more poets will stop by and provide feedback. I will give one more week for poets to show their revisions, how their poem changed and progressed, and to ensure that those poets who have not yet provided feedback to other participants have an opportunity to do so. Once the week has finished all those who have made revisions and helped others will remain in the finished workshop. Thanks
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Date: 6/10/2015 3:35:00 PM
Also, please visit my blog as soon as you can ...
Date: 6/9/2015 11:51:00 PM
nice one
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Date: 8/14/2014 5:55:00 PM
Grats on your win:) hope you get a chance to do all that you haven't done in a long time.
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Date: 8/12/2014 7:48:00 AM
Awesome poem Abedin ! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 8/12/2014 7:26:00 AM
beautifully penned poem on writing congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan x
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Date: 8/12/2014 6:41:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "Writing" - sponsored by: Regina Riddle - Really deserved, Mohammad ! -oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/12/2014 5:12:00 AM
A very brilliant piece on writing, Congrats on the win.
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