I did not know how to love you

I did not know how to love you,
I burned in silence, a flame wandering
In the forgotten valley, where time stands still,
Your eyes - lighthouses in the night, beads sparkling
In the ash that remained from our love.
Your echoes, in a hush, reverberated,
Eluding my grasp, unable to hold them close;
Beneath my steps, the burning lava consumed me,
Leaving behind the ash of unfulfilled desires.
I touched you, gently, upon the soul, without you knowing,
Windmills scattering the scent of jasmine
Under heavy eyelids; and I crushed you,
Unaware of your astral radiance.
From the ear of wheat, I gleaned silence,
The same mute piety from which distance was born.
I never learned how to love,
I diluted, became part of the river of love.
Beyond me, where dreams end,
The white butterflies extinguish in the prayer of resurrection,
Leaving behind only the memory of what was
And a deep regret for the unfulfilled love.

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Date: 4/16/2024 3:01:00 AM
This is so touching and so poignant! Your words are really not just beautiful, but they weigh with emotions that hit the soul of the reader, i wish many would notice your work here, as you deserve it, please have a look at some contests, maybe you might like to enter, i have a contest up too, would love to read something inspired by that from your metaphorical words!
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Date: 4/14/2024 7:58:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Dan Enache
Date: 4/14/2024 3:03:00 PM
Thank you so much !
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