Kim Van Breda Poet Free verse

I Did My Life

I DID MY LIFE

I did my life
in the blue dark depths
of a pool
with a medley of
faces staring
up at me

I did my life
floating through sky highs
of mania
with a montage of
confusion
wild and free

I did my life
intoxicated
soaking up
poisonous escape
every day
incessantly

I did my life
in the silent flow
of crimson
red blood and tears
petrified
of this
my final
decree…

I’M DONE WITH LIFE



© Kim van Breda—16 February 2015

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Constance La France May 14, 2015 at 3:55 PM Kim, your poem is deep and dark, beautifully written with wonderful phrasing of words, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my cat poem Kim Van Breda May 14, 2015 at 4:21 PM Thank you.. really enjoyed your cat poem. Yeah.. I guess this is one of my darker ones.. they happen ;)