I Delight At Her Curves

I DELIGHT AT HER CURVES Her curves sparkles in the night I, beguiled to play with her in delight Gently, I pick her arch to steady Deep breath slips, we both are ready My breath softly tiptoes upon her neck as I stir her lightly with planted pecks Over her body, my hands diddle a rondeau sighs and moans escapes a high and low Her curves sparkles in the night I, beguiled to play with her in delight Gently, I pick her arch to steady Deep breath slips, we both are ready Strokes and blows birth tension: a mountain high focused, for here and now must be a bull's eye As one, we wind in merry-go-round sweet the beat we fire boils a dynamite heat Her curves sparkles in the night I, beguiled to play with her in delight Gently, I pick her arch to steady Deep breath slips, we both are ready Fragile lass I caress her first class so as I fiddle and fondle, she in dash The sounds and feelings bloom more wild as the movements we shared one big style Her curves sparkles in the night I, beguiled to play with her in delight Gently, I pick her arch to steady Deep breath slips, we both are ready She shouts and shouts, while I push and pull My heart reach atop and my mind a sugar full... Then, the door's open, mom strides with a frown saying, "Your violin too loud, shut it down..." _____________________________________________ Sponsor Shadow Hamilton Contest Name Love or Hate pick a subject #2 ==Placed 4th== O.E. Guillermo 3:33 pm, March 10, 2015
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Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 9:13 AM
Clever piece, congratulations!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 5:26 AM
thanks much Richard.. :)!
Fraser Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Many congratulations Oliz on this fine win with your wonderful poetry, hugs/James xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 5:25 AM
thank you James. :)!
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 10:13 AM
the beat we fire boils a dynamite heat..so as I fiddle and fondle.......hahahah Ms. Violin. A twist a rare show of anticlimax. ikaw ay isang bituin you are a star Olive. CONGRATULATIONS.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 4:59 AM
hahahha :D! thanks much Rajat.. :) I don't know how to incorporate into somewhat a beautiful topic about love.. so instead I did this... :)!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 2:50 AM
Beautiful Olive! Congrats on big win!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:13 AM
thanks much Dr. Upma.. :)!
Mantra Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 7:19 PM
This piece is brilliant, a masterpiece! Absolutely loved it! CONGRATS ????
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:12 AM
thanks much Butterfly.. :)!
Allison Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:12 AM
thanks much JAn.. :)!
Nance Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Wow, so nicely done! The romance of your music, beautiful! grats on your win!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:11 AM
thanks much Cassie.. :) you also do like that.. :)!
Callus Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 1:47 PM
Wow! Congratulations on a clever and witty offering, Olive_eloi!! I truly enjoyed this poem where you 'make love' to a special instrument. Well done. #7 hugs // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:10 AM
thanks much Paul.. I really don't know how to put humor in my write.. hence this one.. :D!
Hamilton Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:15 PM
very novel take on theme Olive congrats on placing hugs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:09 AM
thanks much Shadow.. :)!
Smith Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 1:56 PM
A brilliant piece Olive....you were stringing me along....hugs Tim
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 7:12 AM
thanks much Tim.. :) I appreciate you dropping by.. :)
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 12:10 PM
You got me going with the title and I loved the twist at the ending - the imagery suggested something completely different! Great write Olive a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 2:08 PM
thanks much Jan... :) God bless.. :)hugs
Fraser Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 7:28 AM
Using a lure as a title is a sure fire way of attracting the bees to the pollen Olive. You have certainly attracted this bee to your honey more than once with your choice of titles. The last stanza was never expected by this bee, I've been well stung by this clever ending. Good luck in the contest, mega hugs, James ;) xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:43 AM
Dino JAmes, hahaha thank you :) I was attracted to the titles of your poems.. see, I made two poems made from your poem titles.. :) mega hugs back!//olive eloisa
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