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I Danced With the Wind

You were sweetly seduced by my treacly scent to come a little closer and take a daring peek Then, tears spilled down your crimson cheek and a drop of blood from your finger was rent My hero, Thorn, pierced you in a fit of pique Did my curvaceous stems hold supple appeal Were you enticed as I danced with the wind I will forgive your touch, although you sinned when you leaned too near to fondle and feel the delicate beauty of my ephemeral skin I am called Bougainvillea, climbing up a fence Protected by the thorn that caused your abrasion A hefty price you've paid for a personal invasion The pain you're feeling is called a recompense You got the 'point' of my unfriendly persuasion I roam about in gardens, but my life span is brief I enjoy the invited company of busy buzzing bees and butterflies that flutter by in Summer's breeze I beg you not to become a snippety flower thief by clipping me to wither and die in a vase, please Originally entered in: The Flower, The Thorn or Both Contest Judged N/A on July 11, 2020

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Date: 9/28/2020 4:01:00 PM
Some sublime writing, Jenna - happy to see this rewarded with a win! Love you vocab (pique and recompense in particular), your word play (butterflies that flutter by), and alliteration (busy buzzing bees). Congrats!
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Date: 9/28/2020 10:27:00 AM
Back with congrats Jenna, im in talented company for sure. Tom
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Date: 8/1/2020 9:55:00 PM
Loved how you portrayed honest emotions of all those flowers that are plucked only to be discarded later. This is such an intricately crafted muse. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/29/2020 5:49:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my NA/HM contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/31/2020 6:22:00 AM
Thank you for the honor, Constance.
Date: 7/29/2020 1:44:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Jenna. Congratulations on your win in Constance contest. Hugs Eve
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/31/2020 6:22:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve. Hugs to you, too.
Date: 7/29/2020 10:57:00 AM
This was judged N/A? Wow! This would win any one of my contests, easily. Congratulations on your deserving win, Jenna:-)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/29/2020 11:04:00 AM
Your comments erased the N/A from memory, Edward. Thank you for your kind thoughts. Hugs.
Date: 7/12/2020 2:29:00 AM
I have never before felt that a flower could be sensual, you have happily proven me wrong Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/12/2020 4:13:00 AM
You got the gist of these lines perfectly. Thank you very much for appreciating them, Caren. Unfortunately, it received an N/A.
Date: 7/10/2020 7:28:00 PM
Wow.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/10/2020 7:44:00 PM
Short and sweet. Thanks.
Date: 7/10/2020 10:30:00 AM
Beauty with natural protection, and beautiful flower's they are too, well composed Jenna, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/10/2020 11:36:00 AM
They are lovely in all colors, Tom. Thank you for befriending me and commenting on my poetry.
Date: 7/10/2020 9:54:00 AM
This lovely flower may only be enjoyed from afar, woe be to those who try to pluck her... Very nicely penned for this contest, Jenna, best of luck. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/10/2020 11:35:00 AM
Well ~ it could be that she was being picky about who was allowed to touch her petals, or maybe Thorn had a jealous thing going on. Thanks for the kind words and the hugs, John. They are returned in kind.
Date: 7/10/2020 9:00:00 AM
WOW! This is a stunning poem, Jenna--enjoyed the tone and flow of your rhythmic creation. Superbly done.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/10/2020 11:33:00 AM
I love 'WOWs'! Thanks so much for yourgrand comments, Vijay.

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