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I dance with the ocean jumping blue waves - soaking in its stretch of sun-drenched beauty Wriitten Dec. 8, 2015 by Andrea Dietrich on the theme of ocean for the "Language of Water" Poetry contest of nette onclaud

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Date: 4/22/2018 2:44:00 PM
Lovely poem, Andrea. Makes me want to stay in the moment. Beautiful.
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Date: 12/30/2015 11:22:00 AM
First snow here but this makes me feel the sand underfoot.
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Date: 12/17/2015 3:47:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 12/15/2015 10:30:00 AM
Yes, the ocean is like a dance refreshing the spirit. I'm a way behind, but bear with me I will catch up in the next few days. Love, daver
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Date: 12/14/2015 9:40:00 PM
ANDREA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 12/11/2015 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 12/10/2015 11:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/10/2015 11:00:00 PM
Congrats on wonderful write n win Andrea!
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Date: 12/10/2015 2:57:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/10/2015 12:15:00 PM
Well done dear, congrats..love the jumping blue waves...BG
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Date: 12/10/2015 11:15:00 AM
You danced your way to victory, Andrea:) Congratulations! Regards // paul
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Date: 12/10/2015 10:47:00 AM
Oh yes we do - beautifully expressed ... CayCay
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Date: 12/10/2015 7:38:00 AM
Andrea, this brings back memories of my childhood summers at the beach in Atlantic City NJ. Jumping the waves as the tide came in! Congratulations!!
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Date: 12/10/2015 6:22:00 AM
What a wonderful thought loved this one Andrea congratulations!
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Date: 12/10/2015 4:27:00 AM
you swayed with this one, andie... very nice...sweet congrats and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs
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Date: 12/9/2015 9:07:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. May I join you?
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Date: 12/9/2015 9:45:00 AM
Yeah, I really, really like it...a fav.
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Date: 12/9/2015 9:44:00 AM
Excellent, hope this does well for you in the contest.
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Date: 12/9/2015 9:21:00 AM
Hi Andrea! I would be stupid not to love this one!:)) We inverted ideas...great minds think alike:) ~ Sweet regards // paul
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Date: 12/9/2015 8:42:00 AM
This is a nice ocean poem. I love walking on the boardwalk at Brighton - someone told me the salt air has "negative ions" - that is why it lifts your mood! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/9/2015 3:07:00 AM
Can I go with you Andie? weeeee!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 12/8/2015 10:41:00 PM
as one who lives near the sea, great visual..good luck
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Date: 12/8/2015 8:01:00 PM
Great one, Andrea!
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Date: 12/8/2015 6:52:00 PM
Now I am not much of a dancer, but for this, I think I could make an exception! Lovely!
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Date: 12/8/2015 6:40:00 PM
this is just lovely, andrea!
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