Andrea Dietrich Poet Tetractys

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I Dance With the Ocean

I 
dance with
the ocean
jumping blue waves -
soaking in its stretch of sun-drenched beauty


Wriitten Dec. 8, 2015 by Andrea Dietrich
on the theme of ocean for the "Language of Water" Poetry contest of nette onclaud

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Line Gauthier April 22, 2018 at 2:44 PM Lovely poem, Andrea. Makes me want to stay in the moment. Beautiful.

Kelli White December 30, 2015 at 11:22 AM First snow here but this makes me feel the sand underfoot.

Funom Makama December 17, 2015 at 3:47 AM lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!

Daver Austin December 15, 2015 at 10:30 AM Yes, the ocean is like a dance refreshing the spirit. I'm a way behind, but bear with me I will catch up in the next few days. Love, daver

Skat A December 14, 2015 at 9:40 PM ANDREA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your win. **SKAT**

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 11, 2015 at 8:14 AM Congratulations Andrea.

Rob Carmack December 10, 2015 at 11:46 PM Congrats on your win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 10, 2015 at 11:00 PM Congrats on wonderful write n win Andrea!

Jan Allison December 10, 2015 at 2:57 PM Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Barbara Gorelick December 10, 2015 at 12:15 PM Well done dear, congrats..love the jumping blue waves...BG

Paul Callus December 10, 2015 at 11:15 AM You danced your way to victory, Andrea:) Congratulations! Regards // paul

CayCay Godwin December 10, 2015 at 10:47 AM Oh yes we do - beautifully expressed ... CayCay

Sarita Milliner December 10, 2015 at 7:38 AM Andrea, this brings back memories of my childhood summers at the beach in Atlantic City NJ. Jumping the waves as the tide came in! Congratulations!!

Michael Tor December 10, 2015 at 6:22 AM What a wonderful thought loved this one Andrea congratulations!

Nette Onclaud December 10, 2015 at 4:27 AM you swayed with this one, andie... very nice...sweet congrats and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs

James Inman December 9, 2015 at 9:07 PM Beautiful, Andrea. May I join you?

Maurice Yvonne December 9, 2015 at 9:45 AM Yeah, I really, really like it...a fav.

Maurice Yvonne December 9, 2015 at 9:44 AM Excellent, hope this does well for you in the contest.

Paul Callus December 9, 2015 at 9:21 AM Hi Andrea! I would be stupid not to love this one!:)) We inverted ideas...great minds think alike:) ~ Sweet regards // paul

Matthew Anish December 9, 2015 at 8:42 AM This is a nice ocean poem. I love walking on the boardwalk at Brighton - someone told me the salt air has "negative ions" - that is why it lifts your mood! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 9, 2015 at 3:07 AM Can I go with you Andie? weeeee!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Frederic Parker December 8, 2015 at 10:41 PM as one who lives near the sea, great visual..good luck

Done Posting December 8, 2015 at 8:01 PM Great one, Andrea!

Arthur Vaso December 8, 2015 at 6:52 PM Now I am not much of a dancer, but for this, I think I could make an exception! Lovely!

Ilene Bauer December 8, 2015 at 6:40 PM this is just lovely, andrea!

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