James Cottrell Poet Free verse

I Cry For Our Country

I cry for our Country, I fear for our land
Where will we be when God lifts his hand
We've got so much baggage, we've got so much loot
Why is it that we continue to turn from the truth
The pain in my heart is growing everyday
Because we're pulling further and further away
Others wants us to lose, they want us to fall
But the biggest failure is we reject God's law
I know I sound harsh when I am preaching
But only because I am for God's teaching
No I'm not bad, No I'm not wrong
For God is my reason to stand strong
And I will continue to hope and pray
That man will turn back to God's way

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James Cottrell August 6, 2015 at 6:52 PM There is but One. Yahweh. I have tested the spirits of other Gods and found no results. Only in the power and the blood of Yeshua have I found any truth. For every vision he has given me is coming true with each passing day. Yeshua is my Lord and Savior.

Debbie Guzzi August 6, 2015 at 4:52 PM That's some fine internal rhyme you have going in your verse!

Debbie Guzzi August 6, 2015 at 4:51 PM Well, there are many God's and each of them think a wee bit differently on what THE WAY is - Do not be lost in the fallicy that saying there is only one God makes it so. Only Islam & Judiasm are unitarians - many Christians are trinitarians. & we won't get into how many Hindu God's there are ;) BUT I know YOUR heart is in the right place. Light & Love

Pam Deremer August 6, 2015 at 4:09 PM Thank you so much! I agree.