I Cried

I Cried

We danced and kissed under the stars all night
When we parted ways I cried
Our last kiss on this earth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Spence Sr Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 7:45 AM
I like this Korean poem. It flows very well and sends a touching message of love. Great job! Joseph
Corazon Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 3:23 PM
whoa......that's sad, but so good.
A   Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 11:55 AM
wow,, sad a bit, enjoyed.. p.d.
Austin Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 8:49 AM
It would have to happen under the stars. Sad and beautiful, Marie. Love, daver
K. Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 5:11 AM
this is really bittersweet, Marie--short but has much emotion into it--nikko :)
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 4:02 AM
Surely you rightly very emotionally. Nice kimo
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 10:55 PM
oh, I love this , so sad and beautiful!! for favs!
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