I Cried

I Cried We danced and kissed under the stars all night When we parted ways I cried Our last kiss on this earth

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/7/2010 7:45:00 AM

I like this Korean poem. It flows very well and sends a touching message of love. Great job! Joseph

Princess Corazon

Date: 6/6/2010 3:23:00 PM

whoa......that's sad, but so good.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/6/2010 11:55:00 AM

wow,, sad a bit, enjoyed.. p.d.

Daver Austin

Date: 6/6/2010 8:49:00 AM

It would have to happen under the stars. Sad and beautiful, Marie. Love, daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/6/2010 5:11:00 AM

this is really bittersweet, Marie--short but has much emotion into it--nikko :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/6/2010 4:02:00 AM

Surely you rightly very emotionally. Nice kimo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2010 10:55:00 PM

oh, I love this , so sad and beautiful!! for favs!