Adeleke Adeite Poet Rhyme

I Crave

I crave for thee oh heights
Fathomless heights,
Hiding beyond the skies
Where wisdom and wealth lies

I crave for thy zenith oh heights,
Fathomless heights;
Not for the audacity of euphoria
Nor for the aroma of nostalgia.

I crave for thy topnotch oh heights
Fathomless heights;
To become the epitome of an epicure 
And my brains and brawns to insure

I crave for thee oh heights
Fathomless heights:
The abode of the twinkling stars,
The home that can’t behold scary scars.

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James Fraser May 31, 2009 at 12:33 PM Cleverly written poem Adeleke, i like - James

Jay Loveless May 21, 2009 at 7:24 AM This is really pretty i think. Nice job.

Farah Chamma May 20, 2009 at 8:44 AM That's a great emotional write...As usual ...Thank you for sharing your poetry Always, Farah

Brian Anderson April 18, 2009 at 5:17 AM this poems flows like warm molasses. thrilling

Jane Bowen April 7, 2009 at 1:13 PM Brilliantly executed and well thought out my wonderful poet friend!~ BRAVO to you and your wisdom of truth...you are the poet~ I loved the epitome of an epicure my brains and brawns to insure...what a thought! and the audacity of euphoria ...the aroma of nostalgia! Just sharp witted splendid poetry Mr. Sir!!! Thanks for commenting on my poem that just barely survived the 1st round ....Yeay!...:0 Have a great week, and I shall do the same. This is going into my faviorites. Always a friend! jane

Anna-Marie Docherty April 6, 2009 at 3:08 AM An unusual way of carrying rhme through both from stanza to stanza, - by way of first two lines in each, therefore linking. But then to rhyme separately last two lines of each stanza separately makes this rather clever aswell as being cleverly descriptive of the infinity of our skies and beyond...Well done and thanks for commenting my writes! Anna-Marie.