I couldn't talk about it, so I wrote a poem

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Silent one sponsored

written 29/06/2024

I can never tell you what I mean,
and what I mean is an absurd dream,
in that dream is you and me in love,
and in that love is eternal bliss,
that bliss is so hard to describe in words,
for words are letters with limitations,
and limitations there are none to our love!
this love I could profess in a painting,
but for that painting there are not enough colours,
colours I cannot bring to sculpture in marble,
coldness of marble do not have heat of passion,
passion so hot I could blow a candle alight,
a candle that melts like my heart does for you,
You are my love, my dream and all that I mean!
Can I be you, and you be me,
and could we be us?

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/13/2024 7:30:00 AM

so sweet ~

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/23/2024 11:15:00 AM

Awe how lovely and hopeful. I'm glad you wrote about these feelings and I'll hope with you! Xo

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/23/2024 12:44:00 PM

Thanks Crystal!! Such a nice thing to say!! :) Delighted to hear from you!

Silent One

Date: 7/22/2024 11:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/22/2024 1:37:00 PM

Thanks Silent one!:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/4/2024 4:54:00 PM

You have expressed your emotion in a wonderful poem, Dear Krish! Every line is heart-felt and brimming with passion. We write poetry not for contest, but to voice our feelings. Best wishes ~ Mala

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/4/2024 9:43:00 PM

Thanks Mala! very nice to hear from you!! You are write! It has to come from the inner soul!