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Silent one sponsored

written 29/06/2024

 

I couldn't talk about it, so I wrote a poem

I can never tell you what I mean,
and what I mean is an absurd dream,
in that dream is you and me in love,
and in that love is eternal bliss,
that bliss is so hard to describe in words,
for words are letters with limitations,
and limitations there are none to our love!
this love I could profess in a painting,
but for that painting there are not enough colours,
colours I cannot bring to sculpture in marble,
coldness of marble do not have heat of passion,
passion so hot I could blow a candle alight,
a candle that melts like my heart does for you,
You are my love, my dream and all that I mean!
Can I be you, and you be me,
and could we be us?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 7:30 AM
so sweet ~
Woods Avatar
July 23, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Awe how lovely and hopeful. I'm glad you wrote about these feelings and I'll hope with you! Xo
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 23, 2024 at 12:44 PM
Thanks Crystal!! Such a nice thing to say!! :) Delighted to hear from you!
One Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 11:47 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Thanks Silent one!:)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 4:54 PM
You have expressed your emotion in a wonderful poem, Dear Krish! Every line is heart-felt and brimming with passion. We write poetry not for contest, but to voice our feelings. Best wishes ~ Mala
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 9:43 PM
Thanks Mala! very nice to hear from you!! You are write! It has to come from the inner soul!
Busha Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 4:47 AM
Love the carrying of each line and the sentiment of love. beautifully written.
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 5:25 AM
Thanks Lisa! Much appreciated!!:)
Onclaud Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 9:41 AM
the woes of secret love well essayed, khris...if for the contest, best of luck!
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 11:13 AM
Thanks Nette! Tried a different approach! pleased you like it!:)
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