I Could Use You

i could use your snort-like laugh on really odd days
even capture thoughts of myself when I’m imperfect. . . and not
i might venture to mimic my own energy for the love you give away
might even try to write a longer line. . . than the one above. . . nope. . . pretty much your 
smile
wild-mile-wide
keeps all things in a picture you never seem to be in
i could use your dust on those rose-color glasses that you take off the shelf
just to see rust disappear
souls and steel don’t mind much for that kind of erosion
you suck, in your choices sometimes. . . we all do
“even-steven”
i could perhaps borrow your tickled distraction of the world
for those times when weight exceeds my plea to. . . wait
the walkers and rushers here. . . do so with heads down
i could use you more around 
me
i could use 
you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 11:29 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Gerry. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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June 10, 2010 at 10:08 PM
wow. i loved it. you seem like a really good writer. can please read mine. it's titled "Silence". [and please comment]
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