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I Could Use You

i could use your snort-like laugh on really odd days even capture thoughts of myself when I’m imperfect. . . and not i might venture to mimic my own energy for the love you give away might even try to write a longer line. . . than the one above. . . nope. . . pretty much your smile wild-mile-wide keeps all things in a picture you never seem to be in i could use your dust on those rose-color glasses that you take off the shelf just to see rust disappear souls and steel don’t mind much for that kind of erosion you suck, in your choices sometimes. . . we all do “even-steven” i could perhaps borrow your tickled distraction of the world for those times when weight exceeds my plea to. . . wait the walkers and rushers here. . . do so with heads down i could use you more around me i could use you

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Date: 6/11/2010 11:29:00 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Gerry. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/10/2010 10:08:00 PM
wow. i loved it. you seem like a really good writer. can please read mine. it's titled "Silence". [and please comment]
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