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I Control My Thoughts

A grueling midday hush The silent truth, revealed Acute, unwelcome touch I resent the way it feels At war inside my mind A self destructive fight I stay 10 steps behind Great howl with little bite Flawed from outside in Plagued by potent shame Relief defined by sin The burden of the blame An unrelenting clatter Judgement, filled whispers You ask me, “what’s the matter” Why can’t you see the blisters I’m reminded, once again That I control my thoughts A debate I’ll never win Now I’ll do as I was taught

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Date: 2/28/2020 11:32:00 AM
Nice poem .Nicely expressed the thoughts.
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Date: 2/28/2020 10:09:00 AM
Everyone makes mistakes. Just part of being human. Our conscience is there to remind us of those mistakes, so hopefully we won't make them again. Pretty deep write, Anna. I enjoyed reading you today.
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