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I Conquered a Mountain

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We met one gloomy, fateful day. We stood face-to-face, mountain and I. We both refused to make way. We sized each other up, then... We began to battle, for it blocked my path. We waged war; it was my greatest adversary! I kept sliding down, but never gave up the ascent. I climbed up, and up, and up, and up, until... I was at the top of the world! I made it! I won. I didn't give up when the going got tough. I still bear the wears and tears of the climb. Date written: 11/14/2021 Note: Strangely enough, the inspiration for this poem came from watching an old movie called "White Heat"; specifically at the end where James Cagney's character goes..."Made it, Ma! Top of the world!"

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Date: 3/30/2022 12:44:00 AM
"I didn't give up when the going got tough" - Lesson to all. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/14/2021 12:12:00 PM
Hello Edward, oh that sounds like a tough climb up that mountain. Blessings .
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/15/2021 11:03:00 AM
Hello Edward, I do not know if it is snowing where you are. it is snowing here for the second day. blessings my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/14/2021 2:15:00 PM
Thanks for the wonderful visit, Darlene:-) Blessings to you as well, my friend.

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