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I Con You Not

Your style is unique Each word very sleek The poems never meek Yet no bad critique Humorous mystique You never misspeak Such lovely technique All your rhyme so chic Always tongue in cheek Poetic batik You kid me not Jan Allison You are a poetess of sublime rhyme. And are the smile and mirth of PS. Bless you. A riposte to Jan's poem "I HUMOUR ICON - ICON YOU THAT I'M A POET" ~Written 15/04/2015~ Shane

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/8/2015 9:28:00 AM

great lines, wonderful expressions. What better way for this message to flow?

Shane Cooper
Date: 5/8/2015 4:37:00 PM

Thank you Funom, Jan is a wonderful person and she brings her humour and good will to PS in all she writes. A true poetess of stature. love Shane

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/16/2015 2:21:00 PM

Lovely, Shane. Jan is a sweetheart. She is one of the stars of the sop. Hugs

Shane Cooper
Date: 4/16/2015 11:51:00 PM

Hello princess! Thanks for taking time out from your busy schedule to visit my little patch. And you are one hundred percent correct, a sweetheart and a star she ranges from bawdy limericks to beautifully delicate Haiku. A remarkable woman. love Shane xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2015 2:19:00 PM

shane, this is fantastic!!! a SEVEN

Shane Cooper
Date: 4/16/2015 9:57:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I am glad you like it. I know that you are one of Jan's good friends here on soup, She is a remarkable poetess and person. I am glad to be her friend. love Shane xxx

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/15/2015 8:38:00 AM

You make it look sooo easy! The storyline flows smoothly and the word choices are perfect. "I'm sure Jan will be pleased. Emile.

Shane Cooper
Date: 4/16/2015 9:50:00 PM

Thanks for stopping in Emile, i am glad that you like my poem. i find it is easy to write about someone you admire, the words all just line up and clamber to be first to be used. love Shane

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/15/2015 6:47:00 AM

- I agree .... so kind of you, Shane !! - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper
Date: 4/16/2015 9:41:00 PM

Thanks for stopping in my friend, Jan is unique to soup. She writes, comments, greets new members, supports her friends and family and works with special needs children. I suppose most importantly to me is that she is my friend. When i saw her write "Well the title says it all … I ‘con’ you all that I’m a poet!" even with toungue in cheek I had to write something. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 4/15/2015 6:04:00 AM

aww Shane that is a lovely tribute thank you *** blushes *** I have some 'Jan fans' and if other's don't like my work they need not leave comments - the great thing is we are all unique have our own style which makes soup so exciting:-) Hugs jan xx 7 faves xx

Shane Cooper
Date: 4/15/2015 6:15:00 AM

You will always be number one in my book of poems dear Jan. take care, Love always Shane xxx