I Closed My Eyes

It should be hard on you
I left you when you needed me the most
I did close my eyes
Hoping you would hold my hands
And stop me

It has been an hour
Wondering if I've made the right choice
It's okay, I will live
But you didn't know that I love you

Every single day you'd say you need me
Like a recitation or some sort of chant
You needed me
An obsession you couldn't live without
It is not love

I'm regretting
Walked out of that door so you'd stop me
But you didn't
Not going to rewind the tape
It will still be the same

If you could realize that we're losing ourselves
Once you loved me
The next day, your eyes said something else 
Yes, I still remember

What were we doing?
We were holding on for this long
It's a miracle
Now, it's time to let go
And I'll be the person to leave

If you could turn back to the person you were
I'm asking something stupid here
It's time to move on
Maybe this time
It'll be the longest time to forget the love we used to have


Fatin Qurratu'aini
1st July 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/26/2015 12:22:00 AM
FATIN:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 7/6/2015 8:31:00 PM
Fatin, Congratulations on your win, SKAT love
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Fatin Zaini
Date: 7/6/2015 11:57:00 PM
Thanks a lot! :)
Date: 7/6/2015 12:29:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Fatin Zaini
Date: 7/6/2015 12:51:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 7/5/2015 10:57:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Fatin!
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Date: 7/5/2015 11:54:00 PM
Thank you so much. Really appreciated it :)
Date: 7/5/2015 9:21:00 PM
Fatin Congrats on your win. LINDA
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Fatin Zaini
Date: 7/5/2015 11:53:00 PM
Thank you very much. This is actually my first time entering a contest in poetrysoup.
Date: 7/5/2015 9:19:00 AM
Thank You for entering my contest.
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Fatin Zaini
Date: 7/5/2015 11:59:00 PM
Thanks Judy :)
Date: 7/1/2015 6:13:00 PM
You entered this poem in my Contest and I think it is very good. Perhaps you would care to change the title to "is there something you want to tell me" I say this because you have a winner here and please add your name and the date at the bottom...Cheers....judy Oh and you should have Soup Mail possibly you would care to turn it on...and possibly not...take care
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