I Choose

At times our SUBCONSCIOUS holds memories we wish that had been It can CONTORT the truth as it can ATTACH a happy SIGNATURE to our very thoughts while forgetting the CORROSION of the bad it will SEAL a new memory into our mind Instead of being pushed away we may view being CUDDLED You do not have to be CONFUSED to cast out the bad memories it may SURPRISE you as it does me You see I ALIGN myself with the good I cast out all that hurt making memories more pleasurable and life a lot less stressed N/A Contest: ten word challenge 1 Sponsor:Kai Michael Neumann Date:8/23/19

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Ann Foster

Date: 9/5/2019 3:35:00 AM

Excellent pen. Ann

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/5/2019 9:10:00 AM

Ann thank you so very much!;)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2019 4:34:00 PM

I have never been a fan of word challenges, Brenda, but I am pleased to see that you have tackled this one with an able pen! you have chosen well....the last 5 lines are proof of that! ~ Warm regards // paul

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/30/2019 5:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul! I enjoy when you stop by to read or comment or both lol! You are far to kind!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/26/2019 8:10:00 AM

A great philosophy. Hugs Rick. You made good use of the ten words. Bolding them adds interest to visual appeal of this piece.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/26/2019 11:24:00 AM

Rick thank you so much! Always enjoy hearing from you!;)

Nick Trim

Date: 8/23/2019 6:49:00 PM

hmm I like this one, your talent shines through as always (ps I hate leaving comments lmao) a fav

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/25/2019 3:18:00 PM

Lol ok I will see what I can come up with!;) silly muppet!;)

Nick Trim
Date: 8/25/2019 10:48:00 AM

I know what muppet I am puppet, lol yeah you start or think of something

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/23/2019 7:02:00 PM

Ahhh muppet I take that as a great compliment! Well commenting is a must as you know! Silly muppet anyway! Hahaha! I can't call you the kind of muppet I do on Facebook lmao! I might get kicked off but ya know what kind I mean!;) thanks so much Nick! Hey when we gonna collab again?;)

Chris Green

Date: 8/23/2019 2:14:00 PM

Very cool. You used the contest words creatively and formed a beautiful poem around them. Best of luck in the contest

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/23/2019 2:42:00 PM

Thx so much Chris! Much appreciated!;)