I, Chimney

One rain-soaked morning at the mill owner’s behest they assembled on the hillside.
High above his workers’ harsh existence, building commenced on the mansion.
Brick by brick, inch by inch I emerged.
First floor reached, two sturdy hollow legs joined to form my trunk.
Upward they built, two more storeys, the roof and then my finery.
Ornate brickwork topped with a jaunty pot – I was the dandy of the mansion.

In cast-iron fireplaces fires roared sending hot smoke through my body.
I was alive, smoke belched out announcing my arrival.
Days turned into weeks turned into years – I became the house’s backbone.
In those early years small boys would lovingly clean my inners of tar and soot.
But this intimate relationship would soon be replaced by cold mechanical brushes.

Decembers arrived and the children posted their secret letters to Santa.
Once devoid of paper their words flowed along my warm smoky currents upwards and northwards.
In war years I served as a refuge for family treasures lovingly packed in tin boxes.
Some were forgotten and still wait to be rediscovered.
On cold winter’s days my warmth was like a homing beacon.
Rooks, crows, pigeons circled like aircraft waiting to land on my warm terracotta pot.

But alas I was not part of the modern way – my starring days were over.
Birds migrated as metal veins connected to gas fires transported toxic cocktails to the rooftops.
Then gas fires were removed, fireplaces blocked up – stale air lingered deep inside me.
My pot no longer a crowning glory was replaced by a concrete capstone.

And now I’m hidden – my external limb amputated through reroofing.
I’m still, I’m silent but I will always remain chimney.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 12:40 PM
Dear Simon, congratulations for your success in Mark's contest with your exquisite poem. Such a great personification of a chimney! I adore the resolute stance taken in the last line for a grand finale. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rogerson Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 10:51 PM
Thanks Susan - I've bee reading some of your amazing works - they make supportive comments from you are even more special
Toney Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 8:30 PM
Simon, this is intriguing poetry and very inventive. You left me feeling empathy for a hidden and forgotten chimney. Nicely done, Professor! Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 14 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. We’re well past the halfway point! Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 15 has already started.
Rogerson Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 11:28 PM
Thanks Mark. I have always been facinated by buildings and seeing a complex chimney stack on an old mansion house gave me this idea.
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