I Care

The ones that pretend to love and care
The intruders to my thoughts as considerate humans
Invaded to my emotions and I was blinded to think they care,
The ones that pretend and still pretends.
How does your mind work when you see me?
Does it remind you of a dying soul waiting to be revived by your breath?
Do you pretend only in my presence or in my mind’s absence?
Truth be told, I fail my mind when I’m beneath your look,
It influence my strength with evil and only evil strength
Weakness is nothing to me without you,
My weakness is everything your hands do on my body,
Yes, weakness is nothing to me without you.
Wonders and wishes are the things of my past, 
Imagine me wonder how you feel when I cross your mind,
Imagine me wishing the weal of feelings will never matter to me,
Wishing I never laid with you at once? 
No! My choices does not make part of regrets,
With your simple sight that embark anger in me, beholds care aside
Why I gather you as “intruders” is simple as my feelings are to you,
You are twice, including the slice you feed me when I am aroused,
You both take part in my emotions made of the Affective part of my mind
One minute you all in, the tempo of your urge to be in me is of light
Then the next minute you brush your images with your lover in my face, indirectly

What do I expect my emotions to act and react? 
Should I respect the fact that your act is not tact to the impact it had on me?
What I mean is the effect of your touch wrecked my pride too,
 YES! I feel for you, two
My compensated heart intimidated by the counterfeit saying,
I care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/3/2016 3:04:00 AM
caring is sharing,the moments of the past well portrayed with a texture so bright and syllable lyrical flow...i like how you question answerable questions and enclose with your care,,,for you decided to share...I CARE
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