I Can'T Wait

I love the way it spins around,
Milkshake mixer's whirring sound,
Lots of milk, chocolate flavour,
What a drink it is to savour,
Better still as it goes down.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 8:13 PM
I like! One order please! Yum of a lim! How much? Here's $7, keep the change! :) Uh, I wasn't done with the comment and it got sent...kidding aside, good morning John! Glad to read your new post...:)
Williams Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 8:55 PM
So nice to hear from you Kim. I think it's good evening where you are, morning here. I will send you one through the post{ but it might leak }. What flavour would you like? Thanks Kim for having a read,.....Your a gracious lady I do concede.......Hugs from John
Smith Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 2:05 PM
I love me some milkshakes... I hand make them for my kiddies all the time
Williams Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 11:16 PM
Hello Tim, What a good dad you are making those lovely milkshakes for your children. I am a milk shake lover too . Thanks for having a read Tim. kind regards----John......PS: i hope you put in a dob of ice-cream on special occasions
Ellison Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 7:44 AM
Okay! You have excited my taste buds! It's early morning here... is it too early for chocolate milkshake? NAW!
Williams Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 8:32 AM
It's close to midnight in Australia Jack, but i'm going to join you. I can hear the whirring now. Bottoms up { to coin a phrase } , here's to you. Cheers-----John
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