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I Can'T See You

every year the same old words creep from your lips the same sweet scent of you enters my nose the familiar high is not so envigorating every day the same old smile has lost its luster the familiar eyes have hollowed out the sweet voice has faded into a gentle whisper the familiar face has faded the sweet voice has been silenced the sweet scent has disapated yet the feelings remain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/23/2009 11:48:00 PM
Cameron, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/23/2009 5:01:00 PM
Congrats cameron on being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 5/22/2009 12:52:00 PM
Cameron, This reminds me of ageing with grace; when love replaces passion and endures. Excellent! Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane
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Date: 5/22/2009 7:48:00 AM
A very passionate piece. I love every bit of the lines. You are such a great poet… keep writing with your passionate pen. Congrats on a well deserved feature. leke
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Date: 5/19/2009 1:03:00 PM
Truth in your wonderful words! Congratulations on your featured poem! Well done! Laura :)
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Date: 5/19/2009 8:21:00 AM
definatley feelings that a lot of people will recognise. well written
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Date: 5/18/2009 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:22:00 AM
Cameron, congratulations on your featured poetry and more success and honor. Ernilando
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Date: 5/17/2009 4:52:00 PM
Such a sad situation yet one many will relate to. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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