Cameron Webb Poet I do not know?

I Can'T See You

every year
the same old words creep from your lips
the same sweet scent of you enters my nose
the familiar high is not so envigorating

every day
the same old smile has lost its luster
the familiar eyes have hollowed out
the sweet voice has faded into a gentle whisper

the familiar face has faded
the sweet voice has been silenced
the sweet scent has disapated
yet the feelings remain

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Raul Moreno May 23, 2009 at 11:48 PM Cameron, congrats on your feature...Raul

Vince Suzadail Jr. May 23, 2009 at 5:01 PM Congrats cameron on being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 22, 2009 at 12:52 PM Cameron, This reminds me of ageing with grace; when love replaces passion and endures. Excellent! Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane

Adeleke Adeite May 22, 2009 at 7:48 AM A very passionate piece. I love every bit of the lines. You are such a great poet… keep writing with your passionate pen. Congrats on a well deserved feature. leke

Laura Mckenzie May 19, 2009 at 1:03 PM Truth in your wonderful words! Congratulations on your featured poem! Well done! Laura :)

Paul Stacey May 19, 2009 at 8:21 AM definatley feelings that a lot of people will recognise. well written

Sharon Winter May 18, 2009 at 6:14 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Ernilando Tugaff May 18, 2009 at 3:22 AM Cameron, congratulations on your featured poetry and more success and honor. Ernilando

May 17, 2009 at 4:52 PM Such a sad situation yet one many will relate to. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Best wishes with your writing. Karen