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I Can'T Elope

I can't elope with him, when you're the apple of my eye. So, don't be a gooseberry green, and hurt my feelings to make me cry. Currant-ly, now, I'm dreaming, of being your precious Honeydew. So, don't think he a-peels to me, for Darling, I'm plum in love with you! We could build a house on Strawberry Lane, you and I, in our own caper-ous stew. So, I'm raisin' my hopes high, that on a set date, you'll say, "...forever, I do!" Paw-paw is slow to give us his blessing, as nervously your palms sweat. So, indulge him, his corny tales of old, then, Sweet Pea, just tell him, I can't elope- yet!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/9/2010 12:47:00 PM
nice poem here but dont rule out elopeing i did it and it was the best! no stress! good write. =)
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:02:00 PM
I love this... it's very funny...was looking for a prune when you said paw paw!! lol Marty
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Date: 1/25/2010 10:03:00 AM
Lol this is cute and kinda funny ^^ nice work Virginia!
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:28:00 AM
funny, I like the fruit words!! Great-fruitly
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Date: 1/23/2010 3:50:00 PM
The metaphoric use in this one is great. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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