Mark Koplin Poet Rhyme

I Can'T Breathe

I can’t Breathe

I cannot breathe; I’m out of breath.
I’m two knees down to face my death.
My life is flashed before each eye.
Forgive me Lord and hear my sigh.

A murmur comes from off my chest.
One final gasp before I rest.
A silent whisper in my ear.
God forgives and calms my fear.

Violence and drugs, I’ve lent and felt.
Judge me not, this hand I’m dealt.
I’m face down in the gutter’s sod.
I’m still your brother, a child of God.

Hear this message I utter today.
Stop the hate and find your way.
The color of skin is just a front.
My ending is not the one you want.

4/26/2021
Writing Prompt - Breathe - Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Constance La France

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Beryl Edmonds April 27, 2021 at 1:53 AM Marvellous Mark, the message is loud and clear for the world to hear... Belle Mark Koplin April 29, 2021 at 6:30 AM Thank you Belle!

L Milton Hankins April 26, 2021 at 9:43 PM Excellent, pertinent rhyme for Constance's contest. I think you should do very well. This is something most of us have on our mind right now. Mark Koplin April 29, 2021 at 6:29 AM Thanks Milton!

David Mchattie April 26, 2021 at 6:23 PM Wonderful poem. Its always good to make your peace with the world before you leave it. Have a great day my friend. Mark Koplin April 29, 2021 at 6:29 AM Indeed, thanks David!