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I Can'T Breathe

I cant breathe Because you do not hear My voice pleading. My heart bleeding A brother, a sister grieving For the loss of life That you have taken Not in mistake But in wanton evil I can't breathe When you should understand my plight. my suffering, my blight At your hands, your fists, your knees Choking, thumping then deceased In a swift act, another life is stolen And then the mourning I can't breathe When I am anchored to the bottom rung No hope of stepping forward Only way is down My future finished, before it began My destiny drifting in a cloud, In uncertainties In soliloquies of redemption songs. I can't breathe Of the heartache caused Newsflash!! another live lost. To the hatred and indiscretions Of an evil, dated in the past Of post colonial dominance Hoping, slavery will last I cant breathe That from the cradle to the grave You denied me Opportunities and growth, that defines me Brutality and pain you prescribed me An in the stench of my suffering you plied me With pain and hurt that riled me Not thinking of the consequences You start to squeeze holding my breath, my uttering, With my last breath, I plead. Mommy, hear my prayer He is killing with his knees Sinking to oblivion, with my last breath I yield, Let me breathe, Let me breathe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/1/2020 2:38:00 PM
This made me cry,
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Date: 7/30/2020 9:01:00 PM
He gave his last breath graciously, there is a lot to be learned about his life and how he turned it all around for God, R.I.P Bro . . . : (
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Date: 7/18/2020 2:16:00 AM
It is so terribly sad. There was no way I could have ever watched that video. I have no idea how his relatives could bear it.
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Date: 7/16/2020 7:30:00 PM
Great poem Reggae! I was there in Minneapolis today where George was murdered
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Date: 6/17/2020 12:36:00 PM
Yes! Speak your truth. Let all hear. This is a powerful piece. Full of angst and pain. Hopefully.... hopefully change will come. Till then we must keep speaking... writing.... Thanks for your visit to my page.
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Date: 6/6/2020 5:10:00 PM
Your heartbreaking piece literally vibrates with anguish laced with the fury of centuries of injustice. This is, hopefully, a pivotal moment in our nation's history, at long last. Time will tell. I only hope that your third stanza does not represent you, personally. Someone who writes as well as you has surely made something good and admirable with your life! Excellent poem, it really pulls up emotions that justly follow such a horrific death.
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Date: 6/7/2020 5:42:00 PM
Thanks Caroline, the third stanza is not me at all but I was feeling it for the lives cut short without accomplishing what they would have liked. thanks for your appreciation.

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