Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

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I Can't Afford To Lose You Now

No, I can’t afford to lose you
In this craziness called life
Though the madness presses in
And I cannot still the strife

I can’t afford to lose you now

No, I can’t afford to lose you
Though I’m catatonic now
In the nothingness of thought
The need to reconnect somehow

I can’t afford to lose you now

No, I can’t afford to lose you
My yearning’s penned upon this page
Fighting all constraints of time
I reach out past my hidden rage

I can’t afford to lose you now

No, I can’t afford to lose you
Your words: a needed, calming grace
Weaving in my troubled mind
glowing wisdom I can trace

No, I can’t afford to lose you now
Not now
Not ever
No, I WILL NOT lose you now!

Eileen Manassian

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Paul Callus March 2, 2017 at 1:12 PM I know that you've had life filled to the brim lately, Eileen, so you're excused for staying away:) Man does not live only on bread:) The emotions in this poem are understandable; there are things/people we come to depend on and somehow become indispensable. The repeated lines are effective and make sense. Hugs // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis March 2, 2017 at 2:24 AM Spring is finally here! So wonderful to see your inspiring poems again! Hope you stay dearest, Eileen! Eileen Manassian March 2, 2017 at 7:56 AM I will try my best, dear one. I will post as I have time. There are too many lovely people here for me to disappear. People such as you. Hugs

Arthur Vaso March 1, 2017 at 9:16 PM Very powerful and raw expressions, great to see you back!! We cant afford to lose you either!!! :) Eileen Manassian March 2, 2017 at 7:56 AM Thanks, dear. :) I don't want to lose you either. Hugs

Eve Roper March 1, 2017 at 8:46 PM Nice to see you and your beautiful work ~<* Eileen Manassian March 2, 2017 at 7:56 AM Thanks, sweetie. Always a pleasure to get a visit from you.

Emile Pinet March 1, 2017 at 11:46 AM Your words convey the depth of your feelings. The strength and power of your love came through your words and into my heart... and stuck there like a magnet. Emile. Eileen Manassian March 1, 2017 at 4:04 PM I'm so glad to hear it, Emile. Hope all is well with you. I haven't been around much lately, but I'm hoping to be able to post more soon. :)

John Hamilton March 1, 2017 at 9:06 AM Beautiful write Eileen, feelings expressed here are definitely communicated to the reader, especially the refrain gives it a song like feel. Well done as always! Eileen Manassian March 1, 2017 at 4:21 PM My dream is to be able to write really good lyrics. I wish I could write a song that would live on after me. Dreams...dreams. Thanks for the visit, John.

Richard Lamoureux March 1, 2017 at 8:52 AM It's great to see you posting again Eileen. I too have been pulled away from here but do try to come back when time permits. As for the poem I don't think you have anything to worry about. Hugs Rick. Eileen Manassian March 1, 2017 at 4:22 PM I forced myself out of my "solitary confinement." I won't bear to lose touch with those who are dear to me, Richard. I'm glad you liked the poem. You inspired it.

Doug Vinson February 28, 2017 at 10:15 PM Vividly written, Eileen! : ) Eileen Manassian February 28, 2017 at 10:27 PM Thank you, Doug. It is based on an actual concern, so the words just came from my heart.

Charlie Smith February 28, 2017 at 9:25 PM I don't think you can afford to loose that person now. Hope they heard you.... Eileen Manassian February 28, 2017 at 10:28 PM :) I hope so too, Charlie. I've been silent here for some time. Life has been very involved. We invest in those we love, despite the inconveniences. I appreciate your visit.

David Meade February 28, 2017 at 8:39 PM A powerful poem -- your words lifted off the page and came ringing home into my heart! It's feels good to be reading you again -- LO . . . missed you. Eileen Manassian February 28, 2017 at 10:29 PM I'm glad, David. I so miss you around here. I haven't been very active of late, but...I've got to get back into the game. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I miss you too.

Tim Smith February 28, 2017 at 6:56 PM It is difficult to lose anyone close Eileen...I hope all is well. Eileen Manassian February 28, 2017 at 10:30 PM Yes, I've tasted that sting before. The wounds don't heal. As far as possible, I'll do all in my power to keep my loved ones active in my life. Thanks for the visit, dear.

Frederic Parker February 28, 2017 at 6:04 PM "From out of the darkened wilderness you came and brought music to my soul like that played from a fine crafted violin"...your poem reminded me of something I had written in another time another place..the emotion of your poem was what I connected with dear poet Frederic Parker March 1, 2017 at 12:48 PM that poem was lost in the distant past of a young man Eileen Manassian February 28, 2017 at 10:32 PM Frederic, your words are always mesmerizing. What a lovely poem that must be. If you can, give me the title so I can read it. :) I've been absent for a time, but I will make an effort to visit those whom I love here. Be sure I will visit you soon.

Alexis Y. February 28, 2017 at 5:34 PM Hi Eileen, Who even you wrote this to is fortunate to have you as a friend. You poured your heart into this write and I'm sure the recipient of this heartfelt piece sees it as well. A without a dout seven:-) Alexis Eileen Manassian February 28, 2017 at 10:33 PM :) Sweetie, you always manage to bring a smile with the sincerity of your words. I know they are genuine and it warms my heart. Thank you for your kindness. I will try to be more active. Hugs, dear one.