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I Cannot Chase Dreams

hypnopompic hues multifaceted jewels confetti luminaries a gift from mother? i’m cosseted in its incalescence its wind chime colors my mind’s fixed upon rubies, sapphires, emeralds even if i fall into somnambulant sleep i cannot chase dreams chimerical blooms cut gems of rain-and-moon-bows that unfurl as i awake 1/17/2022

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Date: 1/22/2022 8:59:00 AM
Love the vocabulary in this Choka, Kim. hypnopompic, incalescence (new word for me), somnambulant! I've had a life long curiosity and interest in dreams. I find them both pleasant and surreal. What really wows me about them is where in the brain do they reside and what triggers them as dreams? / Maurice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2022 9:39:00 AM
I was waking up and I saw jeweled confetti falling from the ceiling. I thought of my mom who died in April. I looked this up…they label it as a waking up hallucination. It lasted a second or two. I am not aware of any dream I might have been having. It was a quick afternoon nap. Crazy, huh? Thank you for you comment. I appreciate you, Maurice!
Date: 1/18/2022 8:08:00 AM
Yes, we can never chase a dream...sometimes my dreams are so soothing, sometimes they are a mishmash of so many things...Loved reading this Kim..."somnambulant sleep" reminded me of Macbeth...Hugs...~ Ani
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2022 9:40:00 AM
Thank you for you comment. Love that you thought of Macbeth! ~ hugs
Date: 1/17/2022 9:09:00 PM
Great imagery and wonderful vocabulary ! Well done Kim.... :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2022 4:35:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! Based on some experience. I was telling my husband and thought let me look this up. <3
Date: 1/17/2022 7:40:00 PM
Coincidence? -- or intended to appear on MLK Day?! Either way, Kim, your dream is a tad more psychedelic, let's say. Cheers, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2022 8:17:00 PM
Interesting take, Gershon. Coincidental. The first word is key. ~ Cheers, my wonderful friend!
Date: 1/17/2022 5:10:00 PM
I love this, super dream imagery that rocks.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2022 7:07:00 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
Date: 1/17/2022 1:43:00 PM
Those dreams always seem to escape our grasp but we shouldn't give up. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2022 2:42:00 PM
Thanks, Tom!
Date: 1/17/2022 9:31:00 AM
Personally we tend to forget our dreams. Hope you'll read my dream. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2022 10:55:00 AM
Thanks for reading. ~ hugs

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