Karen Jones Poet Free verse

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For I Can Move Mountains Contest sponsor Anoucheka Gangabissoon

I Can Move Mountains

Even when there’s snow on the roof
I will have fire in the chimney
I will keep a warm hopeful heart
And a strong steady mind 
Determined despite my flaws
To win it all
Life love liberty

My ancestors lived died in chains
In hopes that I may live die free
Their tears salted the earth
As they walked with bloody feet
No shoes but splendid souls
Only the strongest survived 
That I may live so

I can move mountains
Learning that which can’t be taught 
Acquiring assets that can’t be bought 
I am the eagle flying highest
When my enemy stoops the lowest
And to reach my destination 
I can move mountains for others
That only seem a pebble to me
For my mind has broken it up
Into many rocks and defeated
Any negative thinking linking
Mind over matter

I will use my gifts my wits
My back my **** whatever is
My personal asset 
Grab it and run with it
For my days are numbered
I fear not death 
But aware I must clear the path
Just as ancestors have
I stand on raw shoulders 
And I am too a stepping stone 
When I move the mountain
I don’t do so alone.

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Christopher Delegans February 12, 2024 at 9:37 PM I really like the acquiring assets line. Great poem! Karen Jones February 13, 2024 at 1:34 AM Thanks for reading Christopher so glad you like the poem.

Victor Buhagiar February 12, 2024 at 10:11 AM my favourite hymn is Amazing Grace. I read about slavery and I feel disgusted with it. Alas slavery in a different manner still exists. Intense poem. Karen Jones February 13, 2024 at 1:32 AM Agreed and there is trafficking as well. Thanks for being so supportive dear Victor.

David Fisher February 11, 2024 at 4:23 PM This is so good, Karen. And how you show how you don't do it alone, such a good line! Karen Jones February 11, 2024 at 5:05 PM Aw thank you David!

Sotto Poet February 11, 2024 at 3:29 PM Karen, your writing is both enlightening and aesthetically pleasing, showcasing vivid imagery. Your words exude a remarkable potency and elegance, truly exemplifying the depth of your literary prowess. Karen Jones February 11, 2024 at 4:13 PM Wow Sotto Poet that is such a nice compliment! Thank you for making my day with such kind thoughts! Love and light to you!

Deb M February 11, 2024 at 3:53 AM Soooo powerful and beautiful Karen….such strength in your words! Debx Karen Jones February 11, 2024 at 4:46 AM I appreciate that Deb! Hugs

Saleh Ben Saleh February 10, 2024 at 11:38 PM Isn't it ironic how man takes away another mans freedom in the name of freedom. Enslavement has taken many forms in the modern world, but it does exist. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem Karen, bitter memories, but a good read. Karen Jones February 11, 2024 at 12:12 AM So kind of you to comment. Thanks Saleh Ben Saleh!