Speaks Volumes Poet Free verse

I Can Move Mountains

If
I did not
please You
with the Food I
 dutifully prepared 
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Or the clothes I chose to wear.
If my love was not enough for you
If you didn’t see my aura it wasn’t clear 
If the wine, I served wasn’t of full bouquet.
If I did not boost your ego to make you feel more 
If the songs I sang were not pleasing to your ears
If I did not keep the house spotlessly clean and tidy
If I did not keep our animals clean and well-kept always
If I did not give you my entire wealth to spend as you wished
Then my love, you can move your own bloody mountains, my love.

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Victor Buhagiar January 15, 2024 at 1:32 AM Delicious muse. Loved it. Speaks Volumes January 15, 2024 at 11:52 AM Victor Buhagiar, that's the nicest thing you have ever said to me ! Thank you so much !!!

Jay Narain January 13, 2024 at 10:09 AM Funny last line. You are dedicated loving partner. You dont have to move mountain, mountain will come moving to you. Speaks Volumes January 13, 2024 at 12:35 PM I must have been in a whacky mood when I wrote it Jay.. its not my usual sweet poem, but I decided to enter it in the contest anyway. Thanks for your great comment my friend. Wen