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I Can Move Mountains

If I did not please You with the Food I dutifully prepared /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\ Or the clothes I chose to wear. If my love was not enough for you If you didn’t see my aura it wasn’t clear If the wine, I served wasn’t of full bouquet. If I did not boost your ego to make you feel more If the songs I sang were not pleasing to your ears If I did not keep the house spotlessly clean and tidy If I did not keep our animals clean and well-kept always If I did not give you my entire wealth to spend as you wished Then my love, you can move your own bloody mountains, my love.

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Date: 1/15/2024 1:32:00 AM
Delicious muse. Loved it.
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Date: 1/15/2024 11:52:00 AM
Victor Buhagiar, that's the nicest thing you have ever said to me ! Thank you so much !!!
Date: 1/13/2024 10:09:00 AM
Funny last line. You are dedicated loving partner. You dont have to move mountain, mountain will come moving to you.
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Date: 1/13/2024 12:35:00 PM
I must have been in a whacky mood when I wrote it Jay.. its not my usual sweet poem, but I decided to enter it in the contest anyway. Thanks for your great comment my friend. Wen

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