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I Can Hear My Voice

i can hear my voice VOICE the inward parts screaming SCREAMING they won’t shut up SHUT UP Enfolded in nightmares NIGHTMARES words big and small come out COME OUT why must they shout SHOUT if only they’d whisper w h i s p e r i’d be keen to listen l i s t e n to a restless quiet q u i e t to beautiful dreams d r e a m s i can hear my voice and make a choice to lessen l e s s e n the volume and intensity p r o p e n s i t y to hear from heaven h e a v e n 1/9/2023 Sponsor: Brian Strand
Thanks to Sara Kendrick for relaying this echo verse form

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Date: 1/18/2023 2:32:00 AM
I think the way you typed this was as important as the message. So brilliant Kim!
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Date: 1/9/2023 3:41:00 PM
wow only when we silence the outside voices can we focus on heaven's whispers, your poetry is well done and very touching, thank you for sharing
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2023 8:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rose!
Date: 1/9/2023 1:47:00 PM
I like the tenor of this unique poem, Kim. Sound of echoes resonate throughout. Cleverly done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2023 2:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay! :)
Date: 1/9/2023 11:22:00 AM
It is lovely, Kim. A very interesting form.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2023 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Ann, and thank you to Sara for peaking my interest.
Date: 1/9/2023 9:16:00 AM
Seems you are hearing your voice in an echo. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2023 9:21:00 AM
Hope you enjoyed! Enjoyed! ;)

Book: Shattered Sighs