I Can Get Out

The little girl sings her favorite song
London bridge is falling down
She learned it from her mommy
She walks down a darkly lit hallway
She ponders 
mommy told me to find the light switch 
*Hmmmm*
though I can't seem to find one
oh well
 the girl whispers
the girl turns back from where she came and starts walking back 
the hallways painted a navy blue 
she holds on to one of the railings
going along both sides of the wall
she reaches the end of the hall from where she came in
she finally sees the door 
she runs to it
she reaches for the door handle
its locked
she turns it again and again
I can’t get out she shouts
She bangs on the door
She screams
Mommy mama 
I can’t get out the door is locked
It’s locked
Mommy
She hears someone rush
To other side of the door
She can see light from below the door
The lights are working now mama 
O That’s good
She shouts
Oh yes they are baby girl
Can you let me out now mommy
Sorry baby but I’m afraid
I can’t let you get out
You will eventually get out
With your brother and sisters
The girls cries for three days straight
Mother never visited
The little girl sees a light
I can get out 
She smiles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/25/2016 10:07:00 AM
There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.
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Date: 2/25/2016 11:04:00 AM
thank u very much :)
Date: 2/11/2016 11:12:00 AM
I PRAY FOR THIS LITTLE GIRL - fullmoonsway hugs little girl
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