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I Came So Close

Last night was so close I had the glass against my throat Then she ran outside Sitting by my side Telling me to never give up I am tired of the lies I love her for helping me As I collapsed to my knees I love her now more than ever I just wish that we could be together If she tries we can make it through No matter rain nor shine We'll make this world for two...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 11/19/2009 12:21:00 PM
Very heart felt:)
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Date: 10/27/2009 7:35:00 AM
Interesting heart felt poetry Robert, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/26/2009 12:23:00 PM
It is a beautiful day to be reading such excellent poetry. Thank you for sharing yours today Robert. Love, Carol
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