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I Bred a Rose

I bred a rose of color rare And gave it to my lady fair. She looked at it disdainfully Then, laughing, tossed it back to me. No man, she said, her heart would hold Lest he applied for it with gold. That one of her high pedigree Was not for gardeners like me. I explained the rose for her I'd named, But there was no swaying one so vain. My shattered heart and I went home And sat there in the gloom alone. The garden that was to me so dear I let grow desolate and bare. Then love and roses proved to me Their resilience and tenacity. I woke one day in early spring To find each blossoming again, And in a spot where all could see Bloomed the rose my new love bred for me.

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Date: 11/7/2022 12:00:00 PM
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 11/7/2022 1:59:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle.
Date: 10/28/2022 12:39:00 PM
Ahh!!! How romantic is this one. I was not sure what to expect and received a surprise ending. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 10/28/2022 1:44:00 PM
Sara, thanks and you're welcome.
Date: 10/23/2022 4:48:00 PM
A fine romantic piece here. Jim. Well done...who says roses are just for women :) Have a nice Sunday
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 10/24/2022 11:04:00 AM
Well, I've always liked them. Thank you, Charles.
Date: 10/22/2022 11:36:00 PM
LovelyJim loved the theme, the rhyme, and the ending was the icing on the cake. A favorite...
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 10/23/2022 11:04:00 AM
Michael, thank you. I guess you're somewhat of a romantic...at times...too.
Date: 10/22/2022 1:28:00 PM
Hello Jim, I lov4 happy endings. I love the roses to. enjoy your weekend my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/23/2022 12:15:00 PM
Hello Jim, Roses are beautiful. I love happy endings. Yes roses. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 10/23/2022 11:03:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene...yes, I like 'em, too...both happy endings and roses, that is.
Date: 10/22/2022 11:42:00 AM
Love the olde world flair you created here Jim..well done
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 10/22/2022 12:57:00 PM
I never thought of it in that way, TS. Thank you.

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