Unseeking Seeker Poet Sonnet

I breathe bliss

I breathe bliss, borne by divine magnetism 
and as is with me, the same is with you
but due to head-heart chasm in body prism,
these sublime mists are felt by but a few.

I stand erect, as a pillar of light
and as is with me, the same is with you
but to cognise this needs spherical sight,
allowing bliss ignition to renew.

I, as in my ego have disappeared 
and as with me, the same can be with you,
in time stretched stillness, whence by bliss strobes speared,
soul’s transfixed in love and light, each hue new.

God dwells at my very core and yours too ~
He’s seen when heart is pure like morning dew

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Ink Empress November 29, 2024 at 2:17 AM Dear seeker, as i read this poem i felt like these words spoke to my soul, and i felt a sense of reassurance and blissfulness flow through my veins, and thats what your words do to readers and i must also highlight “ God dwells at my very core and yours too ~ He’s seen when heart is pure like morning dew” that hits so deep and is so soulfully moving! Felt this poem so very strongly! Brilliant rhymes too, so sublime and flows in such a seamless rhythm, thank you for sharing this sonnet, congratulations on your win. Sending you light always Unseeking Seeker November 29, 2024 at 4:38 AM I’m delighted these words resonate in your glowing heart, IE. Thanks for the placement and for hosting

Andrea Dietrich November 17, 2024 at 9:52 PM What a great entry in Inks contest. So well done. Hope you place high! Unseeking Seeker November 17, 2024 at 10:38 PM Thank you, Andrea dear

Valsa George November 17, 2024 at 9:52 PM "I breathe bliss, ............................... but due to head-heart chasm in body prism, these sublime mists are felt by but a few." So very true, dear Seeker friend. A lovely poem of deeper insight. All the Best! Unseeking Seeker November 17, 2024 at 10:38 PM Thank you dear Valsa