I Bled Too

its like you said.
none of it was real, 
nor will it ever be.
your love wasnt real
your touch wasnt real

her pain wasnt
isnt
just wasnt real
nonexistent
false

a lie the whole time
the blood still stains 
trust me i was there
you lied

not false because 
even a lie exists somewhere
she said she would
she did it 
really did it

no...
you did it, and now
you can live the rest 
of your life

knowing
living 
feeling

it was your fault.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/18/2015 3:00:00 AM
heyy izzy!! i loved this one. i can relate to it so well.. heartbreaks are tough. i can imagine everything you've been through in this poem. so strong, so powerful... well done! (keep in touch!)
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Date: 11/22/2013 5:18:00 PM
I think you must have actually bled on the page. Well captured emotions.
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Date: 11/22/2013 12:22:00 PM
very deep Izzy ~:) Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/22/2013 11:40:00 AM
the wailing of a soul that needs some answers... wonderfuly scribed dipped in wretched emotions.. i like the poetic mood of this, izzy... nice to have read you today!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/22/2013 10:34:00 AM
Wow..This poem is filled with tons of emotion Izzy! I hope the pain is more on paper or imaginary than it is "real" that is, out of your own real world hurt and pain. Either way...Great writing///keep it up sweety...Cheers, Terry
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Date: 11/22/2013 9:18:00 AM
Great work ! The old demon, retrospect is a frequent visitor! You said it so well!!
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