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I Believed

Caught in your web Of lies I believed you I did Every word retouched Tinted Where’s the truth Where’s the lie Entangled in illusion For what reason I believed in you I did AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted this February, 2018

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/10/2018 9:33:00 AM

I too have been in that place believing in people who were artful in their deception! This piece captured it all in a few short lines. Excellent write with another powerful message. Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2018 10:39:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and message, Pandita. Much appreciated.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/8/2018 8:00:00 AM

Sad and well expressed. Something that many people go through and question. Well done Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/8/2018 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi. Your visit and comment are most appreciated.