I Believed

Caught in your web
Of lies
I believed you
I did

Every word retouched
Tinted 
Where’s the truth
Where’s the lie

Entangled in illusion
For what reason
I believed in you
I did



AP: 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:33 AM
I too have been in that place believing in people who were artful in their deception! This piece captured it all in a few short lines. Excellent write with another powerful message. Hugs. Pandita
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Thanks for your visit and message, Pandita. Much appreciated.
Sands Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 8:00 AM
Sad and well expressed. Something that many people go through and question. Well done Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Thank you, Heidi. Your visit and comment are most appreciated.
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