I Believe:

Energy is All around, It lives in the sky It lives underground. I believe All is light, There is no such thing As eternal night. Naught doth rests, Naught stands still, I believe in energy And the power of will. Every single atom And molecule too, All is mind, The foundation of you. Light and energy Live as one, Nothing else exists Under our Sun.

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/9/2016 1:21:00 AM

It seems to me that you are a physicist. All is light and light is bright... you do the thing that is always right.. Trust your eyes, enjoy the sight..... The sun at morning, and the stars at night.

White Wolf
Date: 12/9/2016 1:41:00 AM

Haha, no, not a physicist, but I do share some of their opinions! And I love the sun and the other stars too! Sirius is my favourite, being the brightest of course! Thanks for your comment, /|\

Paloma P

Date: 12/6/2016 12:11:00 PM

Succinctly brilliant determination! :)

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/2/2016 10:31:00 PM

What a wonderful, poetic message delivered in one of my favorite ways - brevity! You have the knack - a total package delivered, pow, pow and smack - without wordy lines. This impresses me and shows much talent! CayCay

White Wolf
Date: 12/2/2016 10:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, CayCay! That is very touching! And I took your advice on my other poem too! And really appreciate your kind help. I like how you comment, it's constructive! You have a new fan now! haha.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/2/2016 10:31:00 PM

Cool existential, Rick. Very deep poem to meditate on. Good food for thought, my poetic friend. Strong poem though. Love and peace to you.

White Wolf
Date: 12/2/2016 10:36:00 PM

Thank you, RW! /|\

Judy Ball

Date: 12/2/2016 6:50:00 PM

Nicely Done Rick. I Believe For Every Drop Of Rain That Falls A Flower Grows. Very wel thought out. God Bless and a seven from me. Thanks so much for the kind words on my "So Good". JB

White Wolf
Date: 12/2/2016 7:00:00 PM

I like that! You should put that in your quotes! This was just something I wrote while I was outside having a smoke! Ha. A filthy habit I know, what can I say I'm addicted to them! Thanks for your comment! /|\