I Beg of You Please

Will you be my love, I beg of you please I'm here before you, down on my knees Shouldn't have knelt Getting up, sure need help Love ya a bunch but my giddy-up has fleed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tor Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 1:04 AM
Jack its ok to take it easy. Let her get on her knees she can do it just as well as you.
Ellison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:49 AM
But that's just not right! Great idea though! LOL
Eastman Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 12:46 PM
Been a weird few weeks at our home. New pacemaker. puppie put to sleep. Locked out of the house and used a tall garbage can to crawl back in the kitchen sink window. Found wasps inside (the outside lid) of my sons car's gas cap. Did a lively dance before filling the tank. Found more wasps in his car trunk(lively dance again). And worst of all- Jack got sick! Glad your back! Need some new excitement... Things were getting dull... LOL... REALLY! Where is a good Dragon or Troll when you need one!
Ellison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:48 AM
Locked out???? Been there, done that! Did the same thing... crawl through an unlocked window! Hmmm some clever bad guy could do the same thing!!! :( xoxox
Smith Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 11:09 AM
When your giddyup is lacking....and instead of forward your backing....tickle the fancy....of the neighbor girl Nancy....and soon those jokes you'll be a cracking.
Ellison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:45 AM
OOOOUUUU! The neighbour's young daughter is a hottie! Did ya hear the one about......
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 7:51 AM
I know the feeling been struggling with sciatica since 21st sept ... but am finally on the mend:-) hugs Jan xx
Ellison Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 9:17 AM
So sorry to hear that dear sis! Happy to hear you're on the mend though!!! Love, Jack xxx
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