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I Asked You, and You Responed

Good afternoon, Ms. How are you doing today May I offer you a warm beverage on this cold and rainy day I waited and then I replied, I can not lie, but I must have some before I freeze and die The guy replied, Oh no I don't want to see you freeze and die I replied, but why, you don't know me at all But the guy said, I do know you very well, you been in my dreams that I've had and now I'm so glad that I found you. You came and walked right into my door, they're is so much happiness in store for you and I I replied, but why, you don't know how I feel or what I am like The guy replied, I know this that you are my type, I dreamt of your face and your fair skin, I imagine one day kneeling down while people around and asking you to marry my mind, my body, and my soul, knowing one day we will live forever and never grow old. In that place where the streets are pave with gold that's what I was told. So Ms. Please give me a chance to be with you and to love your mind, share my love and my inner thoughts, surely you will love me and love my kind heart. So Ms. I ask you this one last time, Will you have me? I replied from the bottom of my very soul, Yes I would like some coffee to warm me up from the cold.

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Date: 6/14/2016 7:31:00 PM
melissa gwynn, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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