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I Ask You

What is that wonderful smell
when a rain shower passes
on a warm summer day?
Is it the fragrance of a new beginning,
quenching us with the exuberance
of youthful joy, a sweet wisp of hope
for the earth to embrace,
a cleansing, a freshness of favor,
a cause for the celebration of life?
I ask you then, 
if it is all of that,
why would anyone 
with any sense of poetic license
want to own an umbrella?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 8:22 AM
Hello Charlie, a good question: I do not own one. Have a nice day my friend.
J.T. Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 5:33 PM
I guess to keep from getting wet; I too like the smell of rain; good poem -JT
Smith Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 11:24 AM
Thank you JT...
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Hello Charlie, I agree I like to walk in the rain. I never carry an umbrella when it rains. Have a nice day my friend.
Smith Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Thanks again Darlene...
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 3:38 PM
I don't see a new poem but came to see this one again. It's just so beautiful.
Smith Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Thank you Andrea...
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Hello Charlie, I like the rain when it sprinkles to the ground. I like the sound of the rain,it soothing for sleeping. I would rather get wet in the rain than carry the umbrella. Have a nice day my friend. I had toe surgery done on my big toe that is why i have not been on the computer. Have a nice day my friend.
Smith Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thank you Darlene...
Lindley Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 4:12 PM
When walking in the rain is a true joy, the merest thought of using an umbrella is abhorrent my good friend. I do so miss those youthful days and even my brother and I running races in the rain.. splashing both water and mud.. A bright gem and a fav too....
Smith Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Thank you Robert...
Lamoureux Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Ha ha, good question.:0)
Smith Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 9:18 AM
Hope you enjoyed it, thanks Richard...
Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 5:19 PM
this is absolutely wonderful, Charlie
Smith Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Thank you Andrea...
Krampe Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Love the smell, but hate being soaked and cold :) Nice poem.
Smith Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Thank you Agnes...
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:23 AM
Under my umbrella, ella, ella...sweet write rain man...love & rain...^WW^
Smith Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Thanks WW...
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 2:25 PM
It is called perichior Charlie, and I couldn't love it more! I feel the same way about the blessed rain. A wonderful poem! : )
Smith Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Had to use that word in a contest once, thanks Connie...
Curtis Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Charlie, I read this and concluded ........"You Are All Wet" (in a good way) Take care
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 12:28 PM
I just dance between the raindrops Jerry, thanks...
Onclaud Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 7:05 PM
time to dance in the rain without a parasol, charlie... such a winsome write!...huggs
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Let's take a spin Nette, what say you?...
Raven Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Hi Charlie, this is a gem of a write. As a rule i do not use an umbrella. A rain shower can be all you write and more Charlie. My thoughts start anew after walking in the rain, they are more clear. Love the content. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Thanks Mike...
Vaso Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 2:32 AM
Very good question, and to peel the onion a layer further, do we smell the rebirth of life? :)
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Thanks for the visit Arthur. I do, with plants and flowers and stuff...
Michael Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 9:56 PM
And what a lovely smell it is...do you any towels to lend...Nice write Charlie
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Thanks Arturo...
Godwin Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 6:49 PM
You did cute and deep together - what an achievement because it worked. Initially, I felt thrilled because I thought you'd captured a feel I have never been able to articulate and then you popped a line to gain my smile. A winner. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Thank you CayCay...
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 4:58 PM
Good question Charlie..well written indeed!
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Thank you Vijay...
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:35 PM
I enjoyed this Charlie. Thanks for sharing :)
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Thank you Heidi...
Trifiatis Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:01 PM
If only all people were just as romantic as you my friend, Charlie, I think they would never think of getting an umbrella but since some of us, the mere human, are afraid of caching the flew they use one! Haha! Very well stated my dear friend. Much enjoyed!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Very much my friend!
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Hope you enjoyed it Demetrios...
Rose  Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 1:43 PM
lol, When you put it this way, I wouldn't want one. Thanks for the smile, and the refresh Charlie
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Thanks Pixie...
Blown Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 1:40 PM
very 'pungent' write : ) smooth reading...
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Thanks Sand...
Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Lovely, Charlie.
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Thank you Line...
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 1:09 PM
oh Charlie this is a little gem, I love the freshness after a shower. I have never used a brolly since we moved here... its far too windy but I don't mind getting wet in gentle rain but not drenched and soaked to the skin!:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Thanks Jan...
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 12:42 PM
I can smell the freshness
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Thank you Tim...
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