I Am What You See

I’ve joined a group new to the net, 
A group where no one is fake,
A group made of folks living their flaws, 
Not hiding their inner most ache,

And they annoy me with whatever they say, 
Make me uncomfortably real,
Make me be honest about what I believe, 
Honest with things that I feel,

And they wont be my friend just to be cool, 
They wont buy a ticket of false,
They expect a dignified genuine truth, 
Sharing all of my old fashioned faults,

This group I have joined has one cost to join, 
One cost we all must perform,
And that is to unshackle any fake pretend thoughts,
And leave them by the front door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sands Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 11:00 PM
A life fully lived, is a life lived as your true self. Well done :)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 7:14 AM
The truth has set all of us free, the more you experience this, the happier you will be, Lewis.
Kendrick Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Good one. Most everyone has an inner part that is boarded up, closed off and no one but them can enter. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent there. Sara
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