Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Free verse

I Am Virgo Too

In response to my fellow poetess, dearest friend and soul sister, Jennifer Proxenos, inspiring poem “I am Virgo”

I am Virgo too
A September woman
thriving in her Autumn
learning not to sigh over her spring
and summer too!
A gift of Faith
willing to heal her aches.
Her mind, a master in deafening woes
tracing what is fake and low
dwelling in the borders of her heart
making a permanent entrance
nostalgia, dreams.. with a sword
crossing out!
Growing in the shade of Beauty
a giver, her leading role
a leafy tree behind the stage.
Silence, a joyful companion
Time, her friend and foe!
Human connection of a spiritual dimension
What a painful perfection!
The passion within
empowering, awakening
denying her Self a life!
Fine, wise souls
ever attracted to
her beauties wouldn’t for granted take!
Perpetually restoring Self and peace
With Love
I am Virgo too!

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Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2019 at 5:36 PM Love it love it!!! I am Virgo too! Besma Riabi Dziri January 16, 2019 at 8:16 AM I like Virgos! I feel a connection to their inner souls! Happy to know you and see you on my page.. my honour and pleasure Andrea.. Thank you so much for your lovely appreciation! Love and hugs.

David Byrne January 11, 2019 at 12:19 AM Lyrical. Besma Riabi Dziri January 12, 2019 at 2:11 PM My pleasure and honour.. thank you, David, for stopping by.. reading and commenting.. Blessings.

Connie Marcum Wong December 26, 2018 at 1:41 AM Virgos pay such attention to details and make the best of friends. This is a lovely bio Besma. Your kind spirit shines in this poem. Blessings, Connie xxoo : ) Besma Riabi Dziri December 26, 2018 at 9:55 AM Indeed I'm reveling in the honour and delight of making best friends here on PS! I'm surrounded by beautiful, generous and knowledgeable souls! I'm glad and honoured to have you as a dear friend Connie. Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.. Warmest wishes. Be blessed always.

M. L. Kiser December 16, 2018 at 10:57 AM Beautiful sentiments wrapped in a soul-package. A wonderful inspiring read that no doubt, Jennifer is thrilled to receive. Well penned, Besma, a generous gift to your friend. Besma Riabi Dziri December 17, 2018 at 5:03 AM Thank you so much M. L. Kiser for your lovely feedback, kind and generous words.. a heart of a poet does feel every single beauty! We are blessed with caring and loving souls on the path of life and poetry! My deepest regards. Be blessed.

Jennifer Proxenos December 3, 2018 at 11:57 AM Hi Besma, I am so proud of you my dear soul sister - congratulations you are truly very talented! love and hugs, Jennifer. Besma Riabi Dziri December 3, 2018 at 3:19 PM Your presence on my page is honouring dearest Jennifer.. I'm blessed to have you as a soul sister warming my heart and bringing huge smiles.. thank you so much. Be blessed always. Love and hugs.

Paul Callus November 30, 2018 at 7:43 AM This is a striking 'bio' which highlights the beautiful attributes of this Virgoan woman...a lovely character with many talents to be proud of. ~ Warm regards // paul Besma Riabi Dziri December 1, 2018 at 4:38 AM I'm so much grateful, honoured and humbled by your heartfelt and kind words Paul.. Indeed, many a trait I'm proud of.. I always look up to the positive side!! A great joy to read your elating and sincere comments. Best regards.

Harry Horsman November 28, 2018 at 11:02 AM Truly beautiful, Besma, i believe i have just read a classic poem, one full of inspiration and dignity. Besma Riabi Dziri November 28, 2018 at 3:09 PM So much honoured and pleased by your visit and feedback Harry.. I highly appreciate your generous and praising words.. they mean a lot to me.. thank you so much. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Robert Lindley November 27, 2018 at 6:46 PM You are a poet! One that possesses a poet's true heart, immense depths and caring personality my dear friend. One that I am fortunate enough to call my great friend. A poet that sings to the stars* Dances to life's exquisite beat* A Venus, seeking a new Mars* With verses that are golden treat* Fav'ing your gem my friend... Besma Riabi Dziri November 28, 2018 at 3:19 AM The honour and the delight are mine Robert! Such great and sincere words are seeds of wondrous beauties you masterfully sow into the soul of your fellow poet and friend.. Such pearly words emanating from a poet of grandeur, an open heart and a sharp mind let the voice of my humble poetry acquire a higher dimension of heavenly beauty I always aspire to.. deeply humbled and grateful to you.. Besma Riabi Dziri November 28, 2018 at 3:19 AM my humble words couldn't meet your outshining gems.. my deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Arthur Vaso November 26, 2018 at 2:02 AM You are not only a Virgo, you are a poet with a deep heart! Besma Riabi Dziri November 27, 2018 at 1:08 PM Thank you so much Arthur for your honouring visit and genuine appreciation.. highly appreciated and delightful.. Best regards.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 26, 2018 at 1:14 AM Of course you are my dearest, Besma. Youl love deep, your knowledge vast, your heart fearless, your spirit encompassing the world. Excellent concept superbly written. Bless you! Besma Riabi Dziri November 27, 2018 at 1:01 PM Dear Demetrios, I am so much obliged to your beautiful and kind words on my humble words and soul.. I highly appreciate and treasure your heartfelt and generous feedback.. deeply honoured and humbled.. Regards and blessings.

Susan Ashley November 25, 2018 at 7:19 PM I consider myself so fortunate to be an avid reader of your deep, expressive and exquisite poetry, my dearest friend, Besma. A stunning tribute to Jennifer’s poem. The beauty of your first five lines took my breath away with its insightful and inspiring sentiments. I am a September woman too, but a Libra, who is also thriving in my Autumn and learning not sigh over my Spring or Summer as well. The entirety of your wondrous creation, the spirituality, the passion, the painful perfection captivated my emotions and my imagination. A great gem of poetry and a fav! Warmest wishes, love and hugs my esteemed and sweet friend.. ~Susan Besma Riabi Dziri November 26, 2018 at 2:52 PM I'm so much grateful to you dearest Susan for the beauty and bliss you bring to my soul.. my sincere and warmest wishes.. Love and hugs. Besma Riabi Dziri November 26, 2018 at 2:49 PM I am under a lucky star having you as a sister soul too.. being a September Woman, thriving in your Autumn..a wise soul.. sensitive poetess.. an open loving heart.. what can I ask for more?!.. a blessing from God to have such a beautiful soul in my life encouraging.. rewarding and honouring my humble poetry with the finest of poetic words and most heartfelt and cherished feedbacks..

Tom Cunningham November 25, 2018 at 3:30 PM Beautiful tribute to Jennifers poem Besma. Well written. Tom Besma Riabi Dziri November 26, 2018 at 2:30 PM My pleasure Tom, thank you so much for your lovely feedback.. I'm glad it touched your soul.. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Silent One November 25, 2018 at 3:28 PM I have so many friends and family who are virgo.. so stubborn they are wrote it so well.. Besma Riabi Dziri November 26, 2018 at 2:27 PM Thank you so much Silent One for your appreciative feedback.. always a pleasure to read your encouraging words. Best regards.

Jennifer Proxenos November 25, 2018 at 2:37 PM What can I say Besma other than this poem is truly a deep and wonderful description of yourself. I am truly flattered and honoured by your tribute to my poem and your much valued following. May blessings come your way always Besma my friend. love and hugs, Jennifer. Besma Riabi Dziri November 26, 2018 at 2:24 PM Your heartfelt and genuine poem is a pearly seed I enfolded into my humble poem.. The honour and pleasure are mine dearest Jennifer.. stay always blessed with the finest beauties.. love and hugs.

Vijay Pandit November 25, 2018 at 2:08 PM So many beautiful human qualities you describe in this poem..and to see that it is a portrait of you is quite apt and rewarding. A giver, a human connection of a spiritual dimension, passion within empowering, awakening.... You wrote a perfect human and it looks good on you my friend. God bless! Regards, Besma. Besma Riabi Dziri November 26, 2018 at 1:59 PM None can attain perfection! But i think that the whole process is a journey of soul changing.. I can't thank you enough dear Vijay for your generosity and kindness.. and for always being here encouraging and uplifting my humble poetry.. so much honoured, blessed and grateful.. Regards and blessings.