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I Am Travelling On a Train

I am travelling on a train, Enjoying the beauty of rain! Playing a game, Which is not so fame! I am travelling on a train, In which snacks sellers tell me to take, But I ignore and assume everything as fake! I am travelling on a train! I am travelling on a train! I am travelling on such a long vehicle, This makes me think-“Is everything miracle?” Here I see everyone sipping coffee, But I am the only one enjoying toffee! I see many having tea, But why there is a need of paying fee? I am travelling on a train, Which makes us entertain? I am travelling on a train, Which also has a chain! Which is so main, That no one makes it an aim! I am travelling on a train, Which is a bit slower than airplane, But here I give it a nickname, Which is none other than a flair-train!

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Date: 6/3/2019 6:30:00 AM
It made me remember about my journey dear, I loved this poem,keep it up!
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Riddhima Kashyap
Date: 6/3/2019 7:59:00 AM
Thanks so very much dear friend!
Date: 5/30/2019 9:04:00 PM
Travel with pen and paper intact. Allow poetic heart to pen fact. Splash ink to readers truly give. As poet speaks so must he also live.....
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Riddhima Kashyap
Date: 6/2/2019 5:19:00 AM
Wow! Brilliant, Thank you so much Robert. :-)
Date: 5/8/2019 11:52:00 PM
Welcome my friend. You're off to a great start. Look forward to your work. Have a great day.
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Riddhima Kashyap
Date: 5/9/2019 2:40:00 AM
Thanks David!
Date: 5/6/2019 5:37:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Toopsi. I hope you will post more poetry. This one has a nice melody to it, like a song.
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Riddhima Kashyap
Date: 5/7/2019 1:03:00 AM
Thanks Caren! I will surely post new poems and even try to write verse poems as I have even read your poetry. That poems were amazing!
Date: 5/6/2019 7:02:00 AM
Thank you for the journey. So delightful I missed my stop. Love your poem!
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Riddhima Kashyap
Date: 5/7/2019 1:04:00 AM
Thanks Joe!
Date: 5/6/2019 3:31:00 AM
Very nice poetry dear... Keep it up
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Riddhima Kashyap
Date: 5/7/2019 4:10:00 AM
Thank you!

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