I Am the Wordsmith, Guide and Editor

"Dark-heaving . . . boundless, endless, and sublime . . ." Lord Byron 1788-1824 _____________________ I am the wordsmith, guide and editor of this narrative, this epic chronicle and story of abysmal dream love; my fingers are ink-stained and worn from writing, this account of my journey is both tragic and dreadful; it is a ghost story both poetic and darkly painful. I awoke one night to find a gossamer shape watching, it was vague, misty and hovered vapor-like; the form soon became a phantasmal beautiful man, ethereal and cloud-born, unworldly and spiritual; he floated about my bed whispering my name endlessly. His face was noble with a smile dazzling, fathomless eyes made me feel so calm and wanted; when he reached for me I felt glorious and filled with love, his touch was sublime and he whispered I was his; at that moment- I was whirling into darkness. I gasped and realized his skin was corpse-like cold, oh, was he the spirit of a dead man- an apparition; a ghostly shadow come the take me to some deathly destination, but when the specter spoke it was like a warm wave; washing over my soul and I found my arms embracing him. All night I lay in his celestial strong arms kissing his lips, it felt both heavenly and decaying and I had to escape; I had to leave this divine desire- and this beautiful man, so with all my strength I pushed, pushed him away; and his arms became threadlike reaching out for me, reaching. I woke in the morning in my bed with sun shining brightly, but my blankets and feet were grave stained with mud; and I fell back weeping for this love boundless, and endless. ______________________________ May 14, 2019 Poetry/Narrative/I Am The Wordsmith, Guide and Editor Copyright Protected, ID 19-1144-258-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Epic Ethereal Editor sponsor, William Kekaula Second Place ___________________________________ Submitted to FGI Blog Series 20 - Epic Brian Strand Podium Place 1
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Roper Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 8:54 PM
Congratulations , Dear Heart.
La France Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 9:32 PM
Eve, thanks so much for the congratulations !
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 6:19 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Constance.
La France Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 11:51 AM
Line, thanks for the congrats~
Haight Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 5:12 PM
So beautifully and ethereally expressed, Constance. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 11:52 AM
Sandra thanks so much for the compliments and the congratulations, hugs ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 7:41 PM
A fantastic entry filled with intrigue and enchantment with a superb ending Constance! It is very deserving of your top placement. Congratulations! : ) xxoo
La France Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Connie thank you for your comment and congratulations appreciate! !
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 6:57 PM
wow , Constance, that was amazing!! WELL DONE in the contest, Dear Heart. Written like from Poe!! Congratulations.
La France Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Andrea thanks so much for your comment and congratulations!
Horne Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 7:30 AM
loved this enigmatic write - thanks for the win in your contest, my friend x
La France Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Jack thanks for the comment and you are welcome !
Delaney Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:37 AM
Intriguing dream, Constance. Ethereal in the extreme. A real winner. SuZ
La France Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Suz, thanks for visiting and commenting, appreciate a lot !
Mchattie Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 10:29 PM
This is why I never eat ice cream before bed. Too many weird dreams. This one was haunting and wonderful at the same time. A very special poem my friend.
La France Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 3:57 PM
David, or cheese, thank you for the compliment !
Lindley Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 7:38 PM
My dear friend, you slay me with this very dark one. Closing thee verses are perfect match to the preceding very, very creative and wondrous body. A fav.. a true and gleaming dark gem..
La France Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Robert, thanks for visiting, oh yes it is a dark one, thank you for the compliment and the fav!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 5:21 PM
What you have written so far is just wonderful Constance. I look forward to coming back in reading your ending. : ) xxoo
La France Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Thank you Connie, its a long one !!!
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