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I Am the Sun

Sand, dust, and dirt I was a soldier girl I picked up my M4 and the magazine My lipstick and my glass of wine You wrote me 5 times to my million and nine The sweat came down like a waterfall Cascading on my back and my broken heart Your empty words left bullet holes beautifully laid out like works of art Your long blonde hair and beautiful stare… Gave me nightmares…Gave me nightmares Study your books and solve their mistakes The equation of love is something given, not something to take Climb your mountain Sprint your twenty-six point, two one Maybe one day you will realize The brightest star to earth, is the sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/22/2016 10:04:00 PM
nice to see again, Zong..skat
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Date: 2/13/2015 11:35:00 PM
Hi ZONG, HAPPY VALENTINES, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:42:00 PM
Awesome and powerful, Zong, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Valentines day, with your New Poet Friend! Happy Valentine's @-> LINDA <-@
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