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I am Surprise

Playing around mouth, cheeks and eyes
I share Duchenne smile
When one buys me daffodils and daisies
Joy blushes  in me all the while
Ah! I am never good at goodbyes.

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Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2024 at 11:28 PM

This is such a sweet poem, and I nearly placed it until I noticed something about line 3. I will tell you in Soupmail.

thriveni c mysore

August 31, 2024 at 5:26 AM

I am a bad rhymer anyway, thank you dear poet for your time & mail. I enjoyed writing for this unique contest. Blessings & cheers dear poet.

Sara Kendrick

August 28, 2024 at 1:39 PM

Sometimes it is so sad to say goodbye. Thank you for sharing this one with us. I enjoyed reading it today. Sara K

thriveni c mysore

August 31, 2024 at 5:23 AM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am grateful for your time and pleasant thoughts. Blessings & cheers.

Valsa George

August 20, 2024 at 9:13 PM

When we receive an unexpected gift, we are moved to surprise and joy and on our faces appear a Duchenne smile... ! Thriveni, this is the first poem, I have read on surprise in this contest. Well done. All the Best!

thriveni c mysore

August 22, 2024 at 1:51 AM

your pleasant visit and kind words bring joy dear poet. thank you for the wishes. cheers.

Janice Canerdy

August 18, 2024 at 8:35 PM

An interesting, creative approach to the prompt, Thriveni. Janice

thriveni c mysore

August 20, 2024 at 8:30 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you liked, Blessings.

Karen Croft

August 18, 2024 at 10:36 AM

Beautifully written.

thriveni c mysore

August 20, 2024 at 8:29 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. I am grateful for your words. Blessings.

Len Gasun

August 17, 2024 at 6:20 PM

An awesome poem in its beautiful form leaving a day with bright sunshine after. I loved it and enjoyed immensely. Thank you so much for sharing my dear poet friend. BEst wishes always. God bless you and your writings. Hugs

thriveni c mysore

August 17, 2024 at 8:39 PM

your visit is sunshine dear poet, thank you for your kind words. I am grateful for your blessings. Cheers & hugs too.