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I am Surprise

Playing around mouth, cheeks and eyes I share Duchenne smile When one buys me daffodils and daisies Joy blushes in me all the while Ah! I am never good at goodbyes.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2024 11:28:00 PM

This is such a sweet poem, and I nearly placed it until I noticed something about line 3. I will tell you in Soupmail.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/31/2024 5:26:00 AM

I am a bad rhymer anyway, thank you dear poet for your time & mail. I enjoyed writing for this unique contest. Blessings & cheers dear poet.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2024 1:39:00 PM

Sometimes it is so sad to say goodbye. Thank you for sharing this one with us. I enjoyed reading it today. Sara K

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/31/2024 5:23:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am grateful for your time and pleasant thoughts. Blessings & cheers.

Valsa George

Date: 8/20/2024 9:13:00 PM

When we receive an unexpected gift, we are moved to surprise and joy and on our faces appear a Duchenne smile... ! Thriveni, this is the first poem, I have read on surprise in this contest. Well done. All the Best!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/22/2024 1:51:00 AM

your pleasant visit and kind words bring joy dear poet. thank you for the wishes. cheers.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/18/2024 8:35:00 PM

An interesting, creative approach to the prompt, Thriveni. Janice

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/20/2024 8:30:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you liked, Blessings.

Karen Croft

Date: 8/18/2024 10:36:00 AM

Beautifully written.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/20/2024 8:29:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. I am grateful for your words. Blessings.

Len Gasun

Date: 8/17/2024 6:20:00 PM

An awesome poem in its beautiful form leaving a day with bright sunshine after. I loved it and enjoyed immensely. Thank you so much for sharing my dear poet friend. BEst wishes always. God bless you and your writings. Hugs

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/17/2024 8:39:00 PM

your visit is sunshine dear poet, thank you for your kind words. I am grateful for your blessings. Cheers & hugs too.

David Crandall

Date: 8/14/2024 8:58:00 PM

A nice happy surprise depiction. Also, thanks for teaching me a new term, "Duchenne smile"

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/16/2024 7:48:00 PM

thank you for the visit dear poet friend. I liked this poetic form, tried for the first time. hope it pulls.

Marilene Evans

Date: 8/13/2024 8:49:00 AM

Spread your happiness with your Duchenne smile, Thriveni! Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/13/2024 8:45:00 PM

you made me happier by your visit. kind of you. Thank you. Blessings & cheers.