I Am Sorry

Looking for forgiveness at the bottom of a 
bottle
But the Whiskey makes me feel lonely and 
hollow
No matter where you'd go I'd follow
I'm sorry everything I've done so shallow
Please understand I don't know why
I never meant to make you cry
Not even when I told my lies
I'll never forget the pain in your eyes
There is no protection from falling skies
Same effect when one heart dies
Everything crumbles when darkness flies
I put you down when all you did was try

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/20/2013 8:21:00 PM
Nathan, , Congratulations on your win ~xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/16/2013 7:59:00 AM
congrats on your placement.
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Date: 11/15/2013 7:46:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/15/2013 6:17:00 PM
well, this one somehow placed itself in my contest! lol so it's obviously meant to be on the winners' list...heartfelt words, I think you should give them to the person they were intended for...:)
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Date: 11/12/2013 12:14:00 PM
No Laura this was written way before you. I've Lost the inspiration and motivation to write. I found it I'm one of my old spirals
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Laura La Quay
Date: 11/12/2013 11:29:00 PM
Well I hope you find it again. You write really good.
Date: 11/12/2013 11:29:00 AM
What lies did you say? Could this be? Of me?
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Nathan Stobbs
Date: 11/12/2013 12:15:00 PM
No Laura I found this In an old spiral. Was written before I even met you.
Date: 11/11/2013 11:20:00 AM
- A "bottle" is no friend in your grief .... well written in the sad bereavement. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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