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I Am So Blank

when i put my pen down down down...... my mind goes round round round round, paper's blank blank blank..... my brain's an empty tank tank tank, I ought to think think think..... but still i blink blink blink, i shake , i swirl i hip and hop for a poem but nothing's in- out to pop for one and 'o' i remember it's already done!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/4/2016 5:45:00 AM

Alshwarya,,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Aishwarya Vr
Date: 3/5/2016 4:58:00 AM

thank you, i read some of your poems and my favourite was the age of the poet destroyer, the frozen nose. i love the way you give a feel to every verse.....and i am still a learner at school. and i have the habit scribbling words in my book whenever i see aspiring things in front of me... and i just love to write poems! i have always wanted to improve in my language as i'm not still that much exposed in literature, and i even like short stories. and i've even started to write a novel. i just seek a good guide who can help me out to improve. and thank you for your support.